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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Zhaneel" data-source="post: 1623793" data-attributes="member: 15829">[spoiler]I dunno.  Since the pictures are supposed to be illustrations, not replacements for the text, I kinda didn't care for the usage.  But that's me, and I'm certainly not a judge.I liked the story.  It was neat.  I think I hear some echos of the story you did with the Evil Old Scientist in Winter.  You have a particular narrative style that alternately works and doesn't work for me.  This time, the exposition didn't quite sit well in the craft department with me.The plot was cute.  I loved the use of the mask.  The first time renegotiation came up I had an inkling of who we were dealing with.  I loved the blase discarding of the body.[/spoiler]Good entry and neat use of the pics, PC.Zhaneel</blockquote>