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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Berandor" data-source="post: 1685122" data-attributes="member: 225">carpedavid, your story is exactly the reason I didn't want to do the story I ended up doing - if you know what I mean. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /> The pics clearly suggested a "wacky superhero" story, and I think when it comes to humorous stories, my English really fails me. I don't have the casual knowledge that enables you to use puns and similar devices.But enough of me. Your story is great. For a moment, I thought you were losing it towards the end, because there was only so much text left, but the resolution was wonderful<s>!</s> (no exclamation marks). There were no picture links in it that I could see, but the picture use was fairly obvious, so I don't hink it'll be held against you.The Captain's superpower is wonderful, btw. Nice touch.herbamonster: nice use, because it seemed as if the creature had given our hero a stronger bond with nature - necessary for the ending. Otherwise, I would have rated it as throwaway, because the creature doesn't really fit there and is gone immediately afterwards.ilithiidstylist: A very cool idea, having the tentacles come out of her head, and using it as sign language! I loved that one! Wiggle, wiggle. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />nojokerequired: I'm kind of torn. On the one hand, it introduced a love angle into the story, and that part was written wonderfully. On the other hand, what were the cats? Why were they chasing Keiko? I felt a little left out of that part, because clearly Captain C. (don't expect me to spell him <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />) doesn't think the situation to be strange at all.talktothehand: Never forget. I liked the idea of Dr. Colossus' handprint smack dab in the middle of the Hall of Heroes. Cool idea!greatestamericanwhatever: this pic is used at the beginning, obviously. I love how he first imagines his mirror image to be young and healthy. Very nice.Of course, take that with a grain of salt, and remember that I am a little caught up in my own story here.Good luck, anyway. I will most assuredly not be disappointed to lose to that story <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

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