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Message: <blockquote data-quote="mythSSK" data-source="post: 4877363" data-attributes="member: 29510">I've left White Raven for now because it seems to be the most difficult one to fix up. I've taken as much feedback into account as possible, and rather than responding to your revisions point-by-point (which would take me FOREVER) I've just gone ahead and made changes with everyone's advice in mind, so you can see my changes listed below or just open the PDFs and have a bit of a re-read if you like. Most maneuvers have had at least slight rewrites, to make them conform to the standard formats, and all have had the flavor text added/changed. As I noted earlier, Desert Wind has already been updated -- I'll include the change notes from that post in this one as well so they're all together. All PDF links in the original post have been updated to reflect the most recent versions. Can someone please let me know if the new versions of the PDFs are suffering the same viewing issues for some people as the old ones were? Thanks. --- DESERT WIND-----------* A THOUSAND BIRDS: Fixed copy/paste error in Target line.* DANCING FLAME: Level lowered to 4.* GLARING BLADE: Level raised to 2. Damage increased to 2d6.* HEATSTROKE STRIKE: Whole new maneuver added.* ILLUMINATION OF VIGILANCE: Heavily reworded.* NOVA GUILLOTINE: Damaged lowered to 2d6, Int damage fixed at 4.* PHOENIX FEATHER HEALING: Added caveat based on Crusader's Strike wording.* RAZOR WALK: Heavily reworded.* STRIKING SIDEWINDER STANCE: Added a prerequisite - 1 Desert Wind maneuver.* SUPERNOVA GUILLOTINE: Prerequisite increased to 5. Damage lowered to 15d6, ability damage changed to Int, Wis, and Cha damage. SHADOW HAND-----------* DISPELLING STRIKE: Level lowered to 3.* DISPELLING STRIKE, GREATER: Level lowered to 6.* PHANTOM CHARGE: Images now do negative energy damage.* SHADOW MIMICRY & SHADOW MIMICRY, GREATER: Changed to typeless maneuvers. Changed workings of maneuvers a bit.* SHROUD OF DARKNESS: Removed the first ability of the maneuver.* UMBRAL JUMP: Redundant in comparison to FATAL BLIND SPOT. Deleted entirely. STONE DRAGON------------* BOULDER CRUSH: Changed initiation to require a charge attack.* BOULDER FALL: Too many unresolvable issues, to way to reasonably fix. Deleted entirely.* DO NOT GO GENTLY: Changed to allow automatic stablization.* DUST WHISPERS: Level increased to 5.* EMBRACE OF THE AVALANCHE: Level increased to 7. Changed to deal 1 point less nonlethal damage.* GAIT OF THE UNSHAKEABLE MOUNTAIN: Reduced to 50% fortification. TIGER CLAW----------* AVIAN WIND DANCE: Too similar to Leaping Dragon Stance. Deleted entirely.* DEADLY LEVIATHAN STANCE: Doesn't fit with Tiger Claw, and a similar stance will likely be included in a new discipline later on at some point. Deleted entirely.* DRAGON FANG STANCE: Brought more in line with the Frightful Presence dragon ability it mimics.* FRENZIED BADGER FLURRY: Limited to two weapons, to bring in line with other attack-granting Tiger Claw maneuvers.* GRINNING WOLF GLARE: Level raised to 2.* LION’S PRIDE TAKEDOWN: Level raised to 2. Renamed to REAPING WOLF STRIKE, as it imitates the attack of a wolf.* ROAR OF THE MANED KING: Duration dropped to 1 minute.* TALONS OF LIGHT AND SHADOW: Badly written and a bad idea. Deleted entirely.</blockquote>

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