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<blockquote data-quote="AngryMojo" data-source="post: 5267031" data-attributes="member: 83096">Critiques!!On the Purple Worm, I kind of see the idea of a purple worm as a creature that bites, and holds on.&nbsp; Very dangerous if he gets ahold of you, so to speak.&nbsp; I think it would make more sense if the Drag Under required the worm to be grabbing a creature first, that way it captures the feel of a burrowing creature popping up and dragging creatures to their doom.&nbsp; Also, the Grinding Jaws seems a little wonky, why not make it a Minor Action attack instead of a triggered action.&nbsp; Instead of &quot;Don't start here or I'll eat you&quot; make it &quot;I chew on you!&nbsp; Nummy nummy humans.&quot;Also, the poison stinger seems a bit too good to be a 4+ recharge, and a move action.&nbsp; If you remove the First Failed Save thing, it should be fine.This way, the worm basically has four attack options depending on the situation.1. I slam the ground and spread out the hurt (Tremorshock)2. I sting you when the time is right and debilitate you (Sting)3. I bite you and chew for a bit (Grinding Jaws)4. I eat you up (Swallow)With the 2 or 3 bit attacks a round, a chewing attack and sting or a drag under, there's more than enough attacks to deal some pretty severe damage.&nbsp; If anything, I'd say there's a bit too much.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="AngryMojo, post: 5267031, member: 83096"] Critiques!! On the Purple Worm, I kind of see the idea of a purple worm as a creature that bites, and holds on. Very dangerous if he gets ahold of you, so to speak. I think it would make more sense if the Drag Under required the worm to be grabbing a creature first, that way it captures the feel of a burrowing creature popping up and dragging creatures to their doom. Also, the Grinding Jaws seems a little wonky, why not make it a Minor Action attack instead of a triggered action. Instead of "Don't start here or I'll eat you" make it "I chew on you! Nummy nummy humans." Also, the poison stinger seems a bit too good to be a 4+ recharge, and a move action. If you remove the First Failed Save thing, it should be fine. This way, the worm basically has four attack options depending on the situation. 1. I slam the ground and spread out the hurt (Tremorshock) 2. I sting you when the time is right and debilitate you (Sting) 3. I bite you and chew for a bit (Grinding Jaws) 4. I eat you up (Swallow) With the 2 or 3 bit attacks a round, a chewing attack and sting or a drag under, there's more than enough attacks to deal some pretty severe damage. If anything, I'd say there's a bit too much. [/QUOTE]

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