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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Ashrem Bayle" data-source="post: 868541" data-attributes="member: 3103">Rough DraftAsh Bratovich10th Generation Tzimisce (Bratovich) Nature: VisionaryDemeanor: MonsterConcept: Pack PriestSire: Deitrich PhysicalStrength: 3Dexterity: 3Stamina: 3 (Bone plates have been added in exchange for one health level)SocialCharisma: 2Manipulation: 3Appearance: 4 (Originally 1, but increased with Vicissitude)MentalPerception: 3Intelligence: 4Wits: 3TalentsAlertness: 2Athletics: 2Brawl: 2Dodge: 2Empathy: 0Expression: 0Intimidation: 0Leadership: 0Streetwise: 1Subterfuge: 0SkillsAnimal Ken: 0Crafts (Body): 3Drive: 1Etiquette: 0Firearms: 0Melee: 1Performance: 0Security: 0Survival: 0Stealth :0KnowledgesAcademics: 3Computer: 0Finance: 0Investigation: 1Law: 0Linguistics: 1 (Spanish)Medicine: 2Occult: 3Politics:  0Science: 3DisciplinesVicissitude: 3Auspex: 1VirtuesConscience: 1Self Control: 3Courage: 4The Path of Humanity: 4Blood Pool: 13 MaxWillpower: 7BackgroundsResources:1 (Money is often taken from prey.)Generation:3Mentor:1 (Deitrich teaches Ash flesh crafting techniques and about the Path of Metamorphosis)Clan WeaknessAsh sleeps with a handful of soil taken from the sight of his embrace and burial.PossessionsBone Sword: Dmg: Str+2*Remington 870P: Dmg 8Reinforced clothing: (Bashing: +2, Melee: +1)*Ash has relocated two of his ribs to his right arm and sculpted them into the form of a serrated blade of bone. By restructuring his forearm muscles, he is now able to make the foot long blade emerge from the back of his hand or re-sheath itself in his forearm. When sheathed, his forearm looks slightly deformed as its muscles have been rearranged to allow for the blade. He has sculpted his left arm in the same manner, but it contains no blade. He did this for ascetic purposes so that both arms look the same. AppearanceAt first glance, Ash looks like the typical street punk of the times. He looks to have been embraced in his late teens or early twenties. Being a tattoo artist in his semi-mortal life, he is covered in various forms of “tribal art” and imagery. The centerpiece, is a black sun adorning his chest, with various patterns radiating outward. Dragons intertwine down his arms and it seems the only place free of art is his face.As a revenant of the Bratovich family, he had learned a bit about the fleshcrafting arts even before his embrace into Clan Tzimisce. Born an unattractive child, Ash has made great strides to rectify this. His body is perfectly symmetrical and he could easily pass for a model where it not for the tattoos and other modifications. These other modifications take the form of bone spurs at the end of each elbow, his shoulders, and a row of tiny spikes emerging from his sternum and ribs. In fact, his ribs have been fused together into a solid plate and excess bone has been relocated to his shoulders to form a sort of subdermal armor. Smaller changes take the form of sharpened, black fingernails and eyes that appear to be solid black orbs.In private, Ash wears a dark red and black robes cut to accent his heavily modified body. In public, he wears black leather pants, combat boots, and a long black leather trench coat. No matter what time of year, he wears no shirt underneath the coat. He prefers to show off his body art. He does however; wear a pair of small ruby red John Lennon style sunglasses when in public to cover his frightening eyes. His preternatural senses are only slightly hampered by wearing the glasses at night. He has long black hair that is typically worn in dozens of tiny braids. His hair is very short on the sides and in the back and the length of his hair on top hangs down to the middle of his back. Intricate patterns adorn both sides and the back of his head. However, unless his hair is pulled up, you wouldn’t know the sides and back where so short.BackgroundAsh came to Spain from Romania in 1972. His family was in the service of an influential Tzimisce who required them to make the move with him. Mere days after their arrival, their master Zantoff Dracov was diablorized by his childe, Deitrich. Deitrich had no use for the revenant family at the time, and so left them on their own. The Bratoviches, along with Ash, decided to stay in Barcelona and make a new life for themselves free of their undead master. However, a year ago, Deitrich decided to check up on the former servants of his sire. When he encountered Ash working in a tattoo parlor, he decided the young revenant might make a good candidate for the embrace.Ash was definitely different from the others his age. His revenant heritage gave him incredible strength, health,  and he had managed to learn a little about the art of fleshcrafting. Despite this, he kept his background secret and went on to attend collage like a normal human though he knew there was more out there for him. It seemed Spain had a lot more to offer than the backwoods hills of Romania. Ash continued going to school and with his work at the parlor, unknowing that he was being watched. His studies in the fields of science and philosophy, as well as his aptitude with the flesh, kept Deitrich interested. Finally, a mass embrace was to be held, and he decided to give Ash the gift of immortality.Ash survived the ordeal, and quickly began adapting to life as a vampire. He had always known about them, but was never allowed to take part. Now was his chance. Unlike most fledglings, Ash took to his new form with zeal. Life had just gotten a lot more interesting. Detrich has been the hand guiding him through this new unlife. He has already taught him more than he could ever imagine about the flesh shaping arts and has recently been talking to him about something called the Path of Metamorphosis and the destiny of his kind. ----------------------------------------------This ok Toki?</blockquote>

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