Emirikol
Adventurer
All: I HIGHLY welcome your feedback on the formatted draft of my 2nd fan scenario: THE LONE WOLF. Although it is for Warhammer Fantasy Roleplay, it can easily be adapted for D&D.
It is already formatted and includes a map (so it looks pretty). I included 90% of the feedback already received.
I specifically need feedback on the following:
1. DISEASE RULES (WFRP3 Rules)
2. Title (the scenario is named after the adventure hook of the same name by Hapimeses (I think that's andrew law right?)
3. Where I should place the monsters in the ship
4. what parts of the ship should be rotted and how bad from the encounter with the nurgle plagueship
5. macguffins
6. hooks by party type
7. plot in general
8. "wants and needs by GM's"
9. the boxed text is rough/incomplete..any thoughts there are welcome too.
10. Grammar/spelling/format
It is here: gallery.rptools.net/v/contrib/emirikol7/
Yours in chaos slime,
Jay Hafner
It is already formatted and includes a map (so it looks pretty). I included 90% of the feedback already received.
I specifically need feedback on the following:
1. DISEASE RULES (WFRP3 Rules)
2. Title (the scenario is named after the adventure hook of the same name by Hapimeses (I think that's andrew law right?)
3. Where I should place the monsters in the ship
4. what parts of the ship should be rotted and how bad from the encounter with the nurgle plagueship
5. macguffins
6. hooks by party type
7. plot in general
8. "wants and needs by GM's"
9. the boxed text is rough/incomplete..any thoughts there are welcome too.
10. Grammar/spelling/format
It is here: gallery.rptools.net/v/contrib/emirikol7/
Yours in chaos slime,
Jay Hafner
