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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Primitive Screwhead" data-source="post: 4794348" data-attributes="member: 20805">Two suggestions on your main page.The left text scroll needs editedI presume "...Designed for aimed at girls it  allows ..." really means "..Designed for and aimed at girls , this game allows ..."  Ick.. I just read the rest of that sentence, which looks like a copy/paste from the books intro.   Since I can not get to the Parent FAQ page, I am not sure if this game is supposed to assist in reading comprehension and grammer skills. This intro suggests otherwise.Not sure that this pure marketting speak should be written this way. I am a computer geek, so the web page itself speaks more than the content.For instance: - Your FAQ frame page doesn't have active links. - Your second frame {with content} has the 'click here' hand enabled, even tho you can't click on 90% of the page. Makes looking for links to look into the product a bit annoying. Example.. looking for details on why there is a 'Wicked Edition'.. normally you click on the picture to get details..and there is a 'click here' hand...but either the link is broken or doesn't exist. - You are using mini inline frames with long scroll bars. As long as the broweser settings are right, this can look and work well. As a parent of a 14 year old girl.. - 'Girl' may not be the right thing to call her if you want her respect {sometimes.. you know how it is... <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/worried.png"  class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":-S" title="Uhm    :-S" data-shortname=":-S" /> } - I might be interested in pitching this to her if there was more than the core book. The first 'real' module isn't scheduled until Sept 2009? - Whats the 'Wicked Edition'? She is sure to ask...Just my >2 cents  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

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