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Message: <blockquote data-quote="BiggusGeekus" data-source="post: 2219202" data-attributes="member: 1014">OK,1) Organize your history into a timeline.  As it is you have several pages of Big God History and since that is emphasized, it is what is going to stick out in the minds of the payers. You do have a recent history wrap up.  That is very, very good.  A lot of people forget to do that.  But it is currently hard to see the transition.  As it stands we kind of go from Big Gods to local politics in a hurry.  A timeline will help rectify that.   Just do me a favor?  Don't leave thousand year gaps in your timeline.  That blargels my fargle.2) You should up the CR on goblins and orcs when determining difficulty.3) I like your character generation system.  But some of what you can buy for advantage points is zany.  This is very easy to powergame.  For six advantage points I can take two skills as a class skill and get a ton of extra skill points?  You are begging for people to abuse prestige classes.  I'd kick around the idea of doubling all costs for advantage points.  Serioulsy.  10 points to start out at 2nd level isn't worth it.  8 points for what is going to essentially ammout to 4 feats is asking for it.   4) I'd suggest letting the characters use action points to boost AC. My d20 Modern group begged for that.5) And on a happy closing note, your cleric list looks fine.  I think there should be more cleric diveristy based on what god you follow.  Good work.Hope this helps!</blockquote>

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