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Message: <blockquote data-quote="twilko" data-source="post: 3076632" data-attributes="member: 40425">Dream sequence.I like it! I do have a couple of suggestions.Maybe "...fall. The creatures seem unaware of your presence. Then one turns. Then another, and another, and another... Soon all except the feasting worm are staring at you. They approach with a keening moan of a thousand corrupted throats. A moan of pain, of anguish, of accusation. They surround you, never coming with arms reach, never taking their eyes of you. Their faces are more animated than undead should ever be. Faces of hatred, of anger. Faces that blame you for their fate."Now I wouldn't mention the hole until then end..."Your view races across the now barren, desolate waste that is this world. In the distance a jagged mound breaks the monotonus horizon. Its huge rocks have been thrust up from out of the ground. But there is no volcano or object at the centre of the mound to have done such violence to the earth itself. Your flying apporach reveals the answer. A wide black hole gaps at and then swallows you up. You feel like you are falling but the there is no bottom. You must fall literal miles. Then there appears a light at what must be the bottom. It races towards you at incredible speed. The light grows to fill your vision.You are in a room. You look around the room from a view point on the ceiling. There is light from a small fire surrounded by sleeping forms. You look directly down. Your own body lies sleeping fitfully below you."Anyway, just a though for you. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

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