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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Tovec" data-source="post: 6126483" data-attributes="member: 95493">Based on a quick look: Much improved. I'll look at each individual god later, hopefully you will give us more on them as well. But yes, this seems more focused.Not anymore, two main ones with two non-members. Very reasonable and manageable.I don't think so, I will look more later.This will depend on more details about the gods themselves. I like the current setup. I would consider a different name for the unbound as they are still bound to one another but that is the only comment so far.I would still create a new distinction, called independent, and then have the black queen and pale warden as the only two members. I would give the pale warden a posse to help him, that's about it for now.I'm glad to see the changes that were made. Merging or at least excising the nature spirits, having two factions as opposed to three (well three plus) really makes it manageable. You can now see an us-vs.-them dynamic going on.Now? Nothing.Now? Everything. Though, I will get back to you on the individual gods later.Are there any other gods you are not including, and other demi-god-races; Giant ancestors of gods, cyclopses for Poseidon, etc.? I'm guessing those likely don't really matter in the grand scheme, I was just wondering. So far I think you have a great start but you.. or rather we.. need to see more of it, how things are interconnected. Also, the next step, I think, is to work on cosmology, but that will largely depend on your setting/world as that goes.</blockquote>

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