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<blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 9140242" data-attributes="member: 57383">Let's see…Missing (shapechanger) tag as is practically tradition now.It needs the &quot;, +4 to hit with spell attacks&quot; removed from Innate Spellcasting.The damage in Plummeting Doom doesn't match the Enworld version. Which I've also just noticed an error in: 15d6+5 is 57 average, not 60.The plummet's first paragraph should be:Plummeting Doom. If the ti-khana war pterosaur has a creature of Large size or smaller restrained in its claws, it can use its action to fly up into the sky and then dives while releasing its grip, smashing the grappled victim into the ground. This does 15 (3d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage plus an additional 21 (6d6) bludgeoning damage for every Plummeting Doom action the pterosaur took while it had its victim restrained, up to a maximum of 78 (21d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage for three rounds spent preparing the plummet. For example, if the pterosaur takes two rounds to build up height and speed, the victim takes 57 (15d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage. The victim can make a DC 15 Athletics (Dexterity) check to roll with the impact, which reduces the damage by 10 (3d6) bludgeoning damage.The Ruinous Shriek damage is 13 (2d12). For it to be 7 it'd need to do 2d6 damage not 2d12.Apart from that, there's just some spacing issues. It'd look better with linespaces before Plummeting Doom, Venomflame, Ruinous Shriek, Creatures of the Yuan-ti and the &quot;(Based on a monster from the Fiend Folio (2003).)&quot; credit.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Cleon, post: 9140242, member: 57383"] Let's see… Missing [i](shapechanger)[/i] tag as is practically tradition now. It needs the ", +4 to hit with spell attacks" removed from [i][b]Innate Spellcasting[/b][/i]. The damage in [i][b]Plummeting Doom[/b][/i] doesn't match the Enworld version. Which I've also just noticed an error in: 15d6+5 is 57 average, not 60. The plummet's first paragraph should be: [indent][I][B]Plummeting Doom.[/B][/I] If the ti-khana war pterosaur has a creature of Large size or smaller restrained in its claws, it can use its action to fly up into the sky and then dives while releasing its grip, smashing the grappled victim into the ground. This does 15 (3d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage plus an additional 21 (6d6) bludgeoning damage for every [I]Plummeting Doom[/I] action the pterosaur took while it had its victim restrained, up to a maximum of 78 (21d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage for three rounds spent preparing the plummet. For example, if the pterosaur takes two rounds to build up height and speed, the victim takes 57 (15d6 + 5) bludgeoning damage. The victim can make a DC 15 Athletics (Dexterity) check to roll with the impact, which reduces the damage by 10 (3d6) bludgeoning damage.[/indent] The [I][B]Ruinous Shriek[/B][/I] damage is 13 (2d12). For it to be 7 it'd need to do 2d6 damage not 2d12. Apart from that, there's just some spacing issues. It'd look better with linespaces before [i][b]Plummeting Doom[/b][/i], [I][B]Venomflame[/B][/I], [I][B]Ruinous Shriek[/B][/I], [i][b]Creatures of the Yuan-ti[/b][/i] and the "(Based on a monster from the [i]Fiend Folio[/i] (2003).)" credit. [/QUOTE]

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