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Message: <blockquote data-quote="hirou" data-source="post: 7969391" data-attributes="member: 6776023"><p>Still impressive. Just from the main plot:</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Does Dalton know about his sister Teraklyr? Maybe consider dropping some info about her prior to adventure 6.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Does your group enjoy philosophical disputes on the nature of free will and second chances? If so, Ashima-Shimtu seems to be mostly motivated by the desire to be judged by someone more worthy than corrupt Crissiliury priests (in adventures 10-12). Rachel Lang certainly bonds with her as former "evil incarnate" character, so they both can share "road to redemption" trope... that is if your player actually wants his former witch and mass murderer to seek redemption. If not so, Ashimu-Shimtu may still be driven by her revenge against Clergy and Nicodemus (maybe he promised to free her and preferred to forget it?)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">"allowing to hear the spirits of machines" seems to fit perfectly with Godmind Urn, seems to be a lingering effect.</li> </ul></blockquote><p></p>