Two suggestions on your main page.
The left text scroll needs edited
I presume "...Designed for aimed at girls it allows ..." really means "..Designed for and aimed at girls , this game allows ..."
Ick.. I just read the rest of that sentence, which looks like a copy/paste from the books intro.
Since I can not get to the Parent FAQ page, I am not sure if this game is supposed to assist in reading comprehension and grammer skills. This intro suggests otherwise.
Not sure that this pure marketting speak should be written this way. I am a computer geek, so the web page itself speaks more than the content.
For instance:
- Your FAQ frame page doesn't have active links.
- Your second frame {with content} has the 'click here' hand enabled, even tho you can't click on 90% of the page. Makes looking for links to look into the product a bit annoying. Example.. looking for details on why there is a 'Wicked Edition'.. normally you click on the picture to get details..and there is a 'click here' hand...but either the link is broken or doesn't exist.
- You are using mini inline frames with long scroll bars. As long as the broweser settings are right, this can look and work well.
As a parent of a 14 year old girl..
- 'Girl' may not be the right thing to call her if you want her respect {sometimes.. you know how it is...
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- I might be interested in pitching this to her if there was more than the core book. The first 'real' module isn't scheduled until Sept 2009?
- Whats the 'Wicked Edition'? She is sure to ask...
Just my >2 cents