Thorod Ashstaff said:Wow, thanks for all the great critique (especially Piratecat, whose negative points I agree with, except that Angela doesn't go back to CERN, chalk that one up to unclear phrasing rather than a logic flaw).
Piratecat said:why doesn't Angela go through instead of John after they break into the lab?
Macbeth said:Ooooohhh, thanks. SOrry ot be so annoying, but this was a real good time for me to start.