It's an improvement, but it's still not a Lockwood or Whelan Actually there is a big error on that pic, one of his forelimbs looks like it's sticking out the center of his torso, it is easily fixed however, by simply drawing his torso *Over* the forelimb instead of under it. Just call it constructive critizism, as it is still much better than anything I can draw currently, as I got two fingers (index and middle fingers) on my main hand crushed as a kid.