Any mistakes or possible improvements to be made to these? The underlined factors in particular are ones I am uncertain about including. Or do epic spells belong in the Rules forum?
I plan on using this spell (or power) as the objective of an adventure for my players and want to get it right, even though they can't cast it.
Gloom of Githzerai
Conjuration (Calling)
Spellcraft DC: 100
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 10 minutes
Range: 75 feet
Target: One called creature
Duration: Permanent until dismissed
Saving Throw: Will negates
Spell Resistance: Yes
To Develop: Seeds: Summon +14 Factors: Summon Monstrous Humanoid instead of Outsider +10, Increase CR by 23 +46, Summon unique individual +60, Creature is called rather than summoned ad hoc +10, Scribe Spell x2 Mitigating factors: Burn 5,000 XP -50, Increase casting time to 10 minutes -18
This spell was crafted by Liritiza’I as a weapon of last resort to defend against the Empire’s enemies. Unfortunately she failed to anticipate the true danger and the spell remains unused, scribed on the preserved corpse of a faceless elf maiden beneath Lake Mor. When cast, this spell conjures up the Gloom of Githzerai, a servant of Murder. This is a very dangerous thing to do, as the Gloom is free to act as it wishes and nor can it be dismissed until it chooses to leave.
OR
Gloom of Githzerai
Psychoportation (Calling)
Psicraft DC: 100
Display: Visual
Manifesting Time: 10 minutes
Range: 75 feet
Target: One called creature
Duration: Permanent until dismissed
Saving Throw: Will negates
Power Resistance: Yes
To Develop: Seeds: Summon +14 Factors: Summon Monstrous Humanoid instead of Outsider +10, Increase CR by 23 +46, Summon unique individual +60, Creature is called rather than summoned ad hoc +10, Scribe x2 Mitigating factors: Burn 5,000 XP -50, Increase casting time to 10 minutes -18
This power was crafted by Liritiza’I as a weapon of last resort to defend against the Empire’s enemies. Unfortunately she failed to anticipate the true danger and the power remains unused, scribed on the preserved corpse of a faceless elf maiden beneath Lake Mor. When cast, this power conjures up the Gloom of Githzerai, a servant of Murder. This is a very dangerous thing to do, as the Gloom is free to act as it wishes and nor can it be dismissed until it chooses to leave.
For Liritiza’I this power was within her primary discipline. When manifested by her reduce the DC by a further 5.
I plan on using this spell (or power) as the objective of an adventure for my players and want to get it right, even though they can't cast it.
Gloom of Githzerai
Conjuration (Calling)
Spellcraft DC: 100
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 10 minutes
Range: 75 feet
Target: One called creature
Duration: Permanent until dismissed
Saving Throw: Will negates
Spell Resistance: Yes
To Develop: Seeds: Summon +14 Factors: Summon Monstrous Humanoid instead of Outsider +10, Increase CR by 23 +46, Summon unique individual +60, Creature is called rather than summoned ad hoc +10, Scribe Spell x2 Mitigating factors: Burn 5,000 XP -50, Increase casting time to 10 minutes -18
This spell was crafted by Liritiza’I as a weapon of last resort to defend against the Empire’s enemies. Unfortunately she failed to anticipate the true danger and the spell remains unused, scribed on the preserved corpse of a faceless elf maiden beneath Lake Mor. When cast, this spell conjures up the Gloom of Githzerai, a servant of Murder. This is a very dangerous thing to do, as the Gloom is free to act as it wishes and nor can it be dismissed until it chooses to leave.
OR
Gloom of Githzerai
Psychoportation (Calling)
Psicraft DC: 100
Display: Visual
Manifesting Time: 10 minutes
Range: 75 feet
Target: One called creature
Duration: Permanent until dismissed
Saving Throw: Will negates
Power Resistance: Yes
To Develop: Seeds: Summon +14 Factors: Summon Monstrous Humanoid instead of Outsider +10, Increase CR by 23 +46, Summon unique individual +60, Creature is called rather than summoned ad hoc +10, Scribe x2 Mitigating factors: Burn 5,000 XP -50, Increase casting time to 10 minutes -18
This power was crafted by Liritiza’I as a weapon of last resort to defend against the Empire’s enemies. Unfortunately she failed to anticipate the true danger and the power remains unused, scribed on the preserved corpse of a faceless elf maiden beneath Lake Mor. When cast, this power conjures up the Gloom of Githzerai, a servant of Murder. This is a very dangerous thing to do, as the Gloom is free to act as it wishes and nor can it be dismissed until it chooses to leave.
For Liritiza’I this power was within her primary discipline. When manifested by her reduce the DC by a further 5.
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