Insight
Adventurer
Renna frowns slightly and clears her throat.
"They look like notes from an editor, perhaps. Or maybe the author himself. He...is criticizing the draft, here he wishes to rewrite a scene. And here...he complains about the moon changing into a man, and how hard that will be to do."
She looks again at the scribble, and a little flower of insight blossoms.
"Oh, but I think these are initials at the end! H and then H again."
Renna looks up hopefully at Murnau and Neal.
"Does that help?"
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Neal frowns and whispers something to Murnau.
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"Yes, yes, that's fine." Neal says to Renna. "I wouldn't worry about the critic there. He's an investor in our film. And someone who wishes to remain... anonymous... at this time."
Neal takes the script from Renna. "I'm not very good with reading scribbles, myself. I don't seem to have the eye for it. A shame, really, I suppose."
Murnau waves at Neal and then walks away, through a door to an area Renna has not seen before.
When he has gone, Neal whispers to Renna. "There is something very wrong going on here. Perhaps it's my rusty German, and maybe this is something lost in translation, but..." He looks around, perhaps a little paranoid. "I don't want to lose my job, so, perhaps I shouldn't say any more."