The adventure title is kind of bad but not a big deal. What is a bigger deal is editing. I have only starting reading through the adventure a bit last night. There were several facepalm moments already and I'm only on page 12.
ADVENTURE SPOILERS!!!! [Cannot locate spoiler tags]
GM: | The start of the adventure mentions what would happen if the PCs were overcome by the first goblin encounter- they would be knocked out and completely looted.
Then is says the PCs could buy new equipment in the town nearby. With WHAT?
The goblin hideout area 2 has a thicket that the descriptive text says provides 3/4 cover. Further down, the thicket info block says that it provides 1/2 cover. Which is it?
The boxed text of area 3 of the hideout mentions 2 wolves. The DM description of the area says there are 3 wolves. ??
I have not read much past that. Consistency & content editing which needs to be done by a human doesn't look very good on this one so far. | |