Cleon
Legend
Moving on (before it's too late!)...
Too late!

There are a few typos in the Master lich.
Firstly, the very first sentence has two ls instead of is:
"A master lich is a variatlon of the standard lich developed from a combination of incantatlons"
Secondly, there are a couple of problems with the Locus Point entry. Shouldn't it be detect evil in "This locus point is a 5 ft. square that radiates faint evil to a detect magic spell."
Better cut the "remains" from "if the floor is destroyed by a disintegrate spell it just leaves the locus point remains hovering in mid air."
Thirdly, the Archmage's attack line has still got a "weapon +16/+11 ranged (xdx)" and is missing a gap in the first "+16melee". It should be:
Attack: Touch +11 melee touch (3d6+5) or staff of fiery power +16 melee (1d6+6 plus 1d6 fire)
Full Attack: Touch +11/+6 melee touch (3d6+5) or staff of fiery power +16/+11 melee (1d6+6 plus 1d6 fire)
Apart from those quibbles I