I think I'm going to change my handle to "SnottyEnglishTeach," but here's a few more corrections:
p.4
"Design Philosophy"
“If it ain’t broke...” - ellipsis needs period after it (four dots instead of three)
p. 16
"Keep the Abilities, Change the Spine"
2nd paragraph
"in order increase a...
I caved and bought the PDF. I'm really loving what I'm seeing so far. I'm not going to pretend I'm of the level to comment on flaws in game mechanics, but, as an English teacher, I'll scrutinize style, grammar, and punctuation for you. Here's what I have so far:
p.12
"Spine Conclusions"
1st...
I'm curious about you're planned publishing strategy. You're going to release the physical book and then another PDF? Is that second PDF free errata or will it be a newer, better-tuned version?
Thank you for taking the time to answer all of these questions. This forum is the reason I'm...
I've been reading this forum for over a week and I'm very excited about Trailblazer, although I haven't bought the PDF. I'm an English teacher and have a penchant for physical books still (alas, they're disappearing under the heel of the Kindle). So, needless to say I really perked up when I...