I love it! Very well written. The only way I would change it would be to cut out the Names and the two ending paragraphs that foretell the current action being taken around the keep. I would just let it be some sort of children horror poem that every one around the village knows but no one...
On my groups first session they succeeded in binding a Guard Drake with rope at the end of the third encounter of Kobold Hall (Skull-Skull!) At this point the session ended and they excitedly talked of how they would begin to train the Drake for their fighting pet in the next session.
According...