Sidran's beginner art

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Sidran

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• Oct 21, 2002

• #1

This is my first piece actually.

Since I have no good art programs on the PC I am using my MGI Photosuite III to do these pieces of artwork.


The first is a typical fantasy castle in a strange landscape...

 

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Sidran

First Post

• Oct 21, 2002

• #2

Bad post

 

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Sidran

First Post

• Oct 21, 2002

• #3

This was just a quick one


Over the Rhine

 

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Usurper

First Post

• Oct 21, 2002

• #4

The first one could benefit from a more structural approach to composition. Think of the path the eye takes when looking at the elements of the image and try to make it as smooth a journey as possible. It's kind of off-balance, with all the interesting details falling middle-to-right and a lot of empty cliffside on the left.

The second could use more accurate use of perspective. The roof seems to be getting larger the farther away from the viewer it is.

 

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Sidran

First Post

• Oct 21, 2002

• #5

Revised vision

Revised the Picture taking into account Usurpers notes.

 

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Sidran

First Post

• Oct 21, 2002

• #6

Here it is

Another bad post

 

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Sidran

First Post

• Oct 21, 2002

• #7

Here it is without statue

 

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Malessa

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• Oct 22, 2002

• #8

I love your style! The 3rd time around on first picture is much better.....Oh and don't forget to sign your work on second pic, or did I just miss it!

Got any more?

 

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Usurper

First Post

• Oct 23, 2002

• #9

It is an interesting style. I like the changes. Has more depth now too.

 

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Sidran

First Post

• Oct 23, 2002

• #10

Here is another one for you.


It took awhile and I am sure with a better program I could do it better but here is what I think of as

Longing for fresh air

It is inspired by the Daemonforge and some writing I have been doing for the setting lately. It is one of the Gates of Numer (DF hell) and an annon. fiend.

 

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