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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    So, to make up for lost time, I got on a roll last night and didn't stop until I had finished chapter 12. Whoo-hoo!
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    I'm sorry for the horrendous delay, everyone. But, I've just finished the next chapter! I hope you all enjoy it!
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    No problem, Jonesy! I've got plenty of things I've been meaning to get around to as well that I just can't seem to find the time for. Hopefully whenever you do get to it there's plenty of more for you to read and enjoy. :-) Speaking of which, chapter 9 is up!
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    Whew! This last chapter was definitely difficult for me, because, as I am learning, dialogue is not one of my strong points. But I did my best (at this point, at least) and I'm eager to get to chapters beyond. So, chapter 6 is up! And again, thanks for your critiques, everyone!
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    Radiant Gnome- first of all, thank you so much for reading some of my novel and taking the time to comment! I very much appreciate any and all feedback I can get. You've definitely given me a lot to think about- everything I've written so far is very much a "first draft", and I've known from the...
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    Tell me about it. Even of the 20+ of my closest friends (several of which were even in the D&D campaign that inspired this novel, and others of which I've been telling about it since I first came up with the concept and they've loved hearing about it), only one has actually kept up with it. But...
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    (I could have sworn I posted this a few hours ago, but I guess the internet says nomnomz.) Hey, everyone! Sorry for the hiatus between chapters- I've been extremely busy over the last couple weeks with some personal stuff (which is thankfully over) and now I'm super excited to get back to...
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    I know what you're saying, and I don't question its validity, but I've spent the last two years unable to write at all because I wasn't able to get myself to start writing the part of the story I "want" to write. It wasn't until I decided to actually start at the beginning of the story that I...
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    Chapter 3 is up. I also made some (minor) changes in the first two chapters- tried out the spaces between paragraphs, and fixed the wording of a couple spots that annoyed me. Nothing major changed yet, though.
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    First off- thank you so much! Your critiques are the exact type of thing I'm looking for. The story and the style I'm using makes perfect sense in my head, and probably makes sense to my friends & family that I've told it to a million times, so it's extremely helpful to hear how it sounds...
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    Whoa! Don't everyone reply at once, now! :-P Chapter 2 is up. Is there a better forum for this to go?
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    Last of the King's Men- a novel I'm writing. Looking for feedback!

    Hello, Enworld! I've begun writing a fantasy novel, and I'm going to be posting it chapter by chapter on my personal blog as I get it written. If anyone is interested in reading it, I am looking for feedback- good or bad. So if you feel like giving it a read, here you go! Last of the King's...
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    Dragon Dice?

    They are most definitely in distribution! Simply direct your FLGS to SFR's website (SFR - Gamers that make games better. Gamers that make better games.™) and all of the info they need should be there. Personally, there are no gaming stores within driving distance of me that sell them, so I'm...
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    Dragon Dice?

    Whoa! It seems my post attracted the interest of Chuck Pint (President of SFR, if anyone was wondering). I guess I'm... honored? In any case, not only are the new rules all-around better (it's about 75% the same, I'd say, with lots of clarifications and a few broken things removed), the way it's...
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    Dragon Dice?

    Hello, Enworld! Has anyone out there ever heard of a game called Dragon Dice? It was first made back in the mid-90's by TSR (it even won Origins Game of the Year in 1995, if I'm not mistaken), only for TSR to go bankrupt a short few years later. It was eventually bought out by SFR (SFR - Gamers...
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    D&D 3E/3.5 Do allies block ranged attacks in 3.5?

    Alright. I may have been thinking of a 4e rule, then. But, yes, I'm aware that there's no reason an enemy should be unattackable just because there's a creature in the way. In the end we were able to talk him into granting the target double cover (+8 to AC), and that was the best we could get. >.>
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    D&D 3E/3.5 Do allies block ranged attacks in 3.5?

    Erm, thanks for the quick reply, but you didn't answer my question. I understand the rules for firing into melee. But what about firing through an ally's square? Let's say an ally is immediately in front of you, and an enemy is two squares beyond your ally. Can you fire through your ally's...
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