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How about something like this: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FJSkvpcdjuhF4WL48GEE6gr7-jkA8PoQfi-jHcHhxx0/edit?usp=sharing

I am working on an example for ya now.

I think they are interesting. I have a few questions about them, since I am thinking about them from a FFG Star Wars Narrative Dice mode. Are all of the die the same, or are each of the colors tuned to different odds or represent differing difficulties, which would be interesting and give a bit...

LOL! This will be a fun little generator. Bullet points and a part that is potentially readable sounds like a good compromise.

I was thinking of suggesting just that... =)

Ok, that is all I have for now. Good luck!

I may also move exits over contents, since walls and floors are closely linked to their doors.

Walls "standing" above something is a little awkward. How about walls that "frame" the room - "The paper walls (frame or encase or surround) a flagstone floor"

Yea, time is a cruel mistress!! Grrr!!

perhaps remove "You enter" as well - redundant. Perhaps start like this "This cirular room.."?

Perhaps also getting rid of the quotes would be good - redundant and will clean up the text a bit.

Here's another one: ""You see a stage, a stage, and a balcony." For fixed things like a stage you may not see more than one, although you definitely could. =)

I know this is more work, but cathcing multiples of items: "You see a stone statue of an aristocrat, a podium, and a stone statue of an aristocrat."

I love this "This room is pitch black. For just a moment, you can see nothing, hear nothing, feel nothing, taste nothing, and you're not even entirely sure who you are." The is one dark room!!

You may also want to get rid of "you see" in front of the stuff that is seen since it is also redundant, and the labels work well enough for that. =)

LOL! Yea, that is an empty problem! =)

Some thoughts! =O Looks interesting. I would remove this text since it is repetitive and not useful - "The next dungeon room follows.", especially since you have the horizontal rule there separating things. Perhaps a long term programmatic idea would be to break down the descriptions into sub...

It is pretty - nice clean layout!

Yea, once you get used to the dice, the system rocks! This is my favorite system! FFG rocks! I am happy to hear that there will be more FFG Star Wars goodness! Yea!!!

Hmmm... it looks like D&D classics has some of that info in the side bar.... =O