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I don't believe you... This can't be the first short story you have written... it's too good. You have pictured a very angry man excellently. From the beginning, after I read the first paragraph in the story I felt the man's anger towards his enemy, his boldness towards his actions, and his...

The fighting scenes are definitely improving. I really liked how you descrived how Gilliam's fear turned to rage, and turned him into a killing berserker; it gave us a little more background on why he stopped being a knight... Perhaps the battle scene became a little long when descriving each...

I hope that you get better! So that you can write the next one... :]

I've been reading since you started, and im loving it, CW. Just wanted to let you know... :) MP