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Looks good... but a few little comments: Con of 24, so a +7 hp bonus/level => 13d12+91 hit points Mulitattack => Multiattack (Argh! Not the deadly mullet... :) ) Don't dragons have all good saves? I get Fort (13/2)+2+7= +15; Ref (13/2)+2= +8; Will (13/2)+2+2= +10 I guess the spiny defense...

We've used a wiki engine where I work and it is pretty satisfying to use once you've got the easy syntax down. It's only been updated once, but I didn't have much difficulty rev-ing the software. I think the key thing is probably making some sort of sensible top-level organization of the wiki...

Is there interest in setting up a general Wiki where anybody can post OGL contributions for general use (and edit/enhancement)? I was thinking of something along the lines of the Wikipedia and possibly hosted on EnWorld, if the owner is willing. :) Thank you.

Looks good... just a couple of comments: The average hit dice should be 53 (6x5.5 + 20) [As mercurio also pointed out, I just noticed :) ) Does the Strength bonus apply on a melee touch attack? That seems counter-intuitive, but I can't find the rule that excludes it. You could also list the...

Sorry to reiterate, but for Magical Beasts the good saves are Fort and Ref. So for the saves I get: Fort = 2 + (6/2) + 4 = +9 Ref = 2 + (6/2) + 5 = +10 Will = (6/3) + 2 = +4 I didn't have an issue with your special ability save DCs. Thanks.

Bite attacks are probably melee. None of the saves look right. They should be either 1/3 HD + ability mod, or 2 + (1/2 HD) + ability mod. What's a 'dayling' spell? Advancement should start at 7 HD. Otherwise it looks good.

Bite attacks are probably melee. None of the saves look right. They should be either 1/3 HD + ability mod, or 2 + (1/2 HD) + ability mod. What's a 'dayling' spell? Advancement should start at 7 HD. Otherwise it looks good.

Kakkuu: I think Grapple is +5. Those Spell DCs don't look right. For example, Scare is a second level spell, and Charisma modifier = 0. So DC = 10 + 2 + 0 = 12, not 14. It should have 2 feats. CR 7 seems a tad high for this creature.

Eez nice, but, if I might suggest, you have a few run-on sentences that could be readily snipped into smaller, bite-size pieces without overly disrupting the flow. Long sentences tend to wear out a reader. In addition, using somewhat shorter paragraphs might also make it a more palatable read. :)

The only problem I see with the stats is that the claw/damage is much higher than normal for a creature of this size. (Typically 1d6/1d8 instead for Large.) If it gets a grab, should it get automatic rend damage each round? This is a seriously bad-arsed creature with very few, if any, apparent...

The reach is always in 5 ft. increments, so really it should be 2-1/2 ft./0 ft. Did you mean Wind-borne? Grapple of the Wind-borne Sylf should be -2, due to size. The flat-footed AC of the sprite should be 13. For several, you list "skill points" under the skills and you have no skills...

It looks like most of the issues I had have been covered. 12 HD is extremely high for a small animal, especially one that comes in large packs. You'd almost have to be around level 12-13 just to stand a chance against a pack of these. A natural armor rating of 6 is also very high for a small...

Everything looks good except perhaps your Will save DC on the cursed touch. If that is Charisma-based, then it would be 10 + 6/2 + 3 = 16. Does it include a +2 racial bonus? Thanks.

Some feedback: At least at v3.5, Weapon Finess applies to all attacks. So Sting should be +2 melee also I believe. Vermin usually don't get an Int score, so they'd have no skill points or feats. But that's your call. :) Since you gave it Alertness, I was wondering why you didn't add in the...

Looks good. A few minor issues: Grapple should probably be +15(HD)+15(Str)+4(size) = +34. Why no Darkvision, or no Listen or Spot skills for that matter? Undead have no Con, and so the typically Con-based saves are usually based on Charisma instead. So the Grave Fortitude save DC would be 10...

The question is, whether the demon-possessed guard captain is trying to pass himself off as normal, or is giving full reign to his demonic passions? Also what sources does he have for furnishings? It could just be full of captured trophies from past war campaigns. Perhaps give the furnishings...

You can take damage from Sonic without necessarily being able to hear. I suggest that it would be a good touch to have this creature strongly affected in some manner by water. The term "looking for a 'good' time" just doesn't quite fit. :) Maybe "looking for an evil time"? I wonder about the...

LOL. Yes, it was a silly name that I got hooked on, and so I started trying to write a monster that would fit my mental image. I have since change the name to Pyre Wyrm in my personal notes. :) Thanks for all the catches everybody!

Still a work in progress. I'm not sure about the CR, and the fury SA may be too cumbersome a mechanic. :) Elscorcho Large Dragon (Extraplanar, Fire) Hit Dice: 9d12+63 (121 hp) Speed: 60 ft. (12 squares) Armor Class: 22 (-1 size, +1 Dex, +12 natural), touch 10, flat-footed 21 Base...

One possibility is to use an Annis Hag, which have the spell-like ability to disguise-self as a human "snow" woman. She could have some boots of the north and a wand or item projecting cone of cold, &c. If you need to make her tougher, she can have class levels and be allied to evil-aligned ice...