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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Y'know, I could write up a chapter today, I do have the free time. What I don't have, however, is healthy wrists. I need to give these two a rest, and thus I won't be able to write a full chapter today, or at least no an average length one. I won't quit on writing this, don't you worry! ;)
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    And here we are, the 2nd chapter of this weekend, just like I promised :) We're nearing 1,000 views, which is freakin' awesome! :D All thanks to you guys who read my story hour, no less ;) Chapter 17 Desperation The giant and the dire bear were at eighty feet from the group, and while the...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Hoo-hah! Another update, as promised ;) From my assessment of the view count, I'd say there's an average of 30 people or so reading every chapter I dish out. Wouldn't it be nice if those 30 people came out and said hello? (hint hint, yes, I'm looking at you) In any case, I should be able to...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Here's the next installment, the first of a couple to come in this long weekend :) Enjoy! Chapter 15 A long journey By the dawn of the next the day, everyone had gathered traveling supplies for their long trek and felt ready to face the journey ahead of them. Each traveler carried an equal...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Ah, I see what you mean now! Thanks for bringing that up Boss, I just noticed that my first post in the thread didn't include my signature, for some reason. I'll edit the link into it, then :) For those who are curious, I'm keeping an update schedule of Monday - Wednesday - Friday. Or at...
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    The Doomed Bastards: Reckoning (story complete)

    I caught up... to page 28! Only 10 more pages to read of good ol' meat-grinder business! :D Lazybones, you started with it, and 3 Books later, you still got it. Whatever it is, it draws me into the story, the characters, and the gruesome battles, without letting go. Please don't stop writing...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    First of all, thank you for posting once again, I'm glad to have a reader give his thoughts on the story :) And yes, Gilliam did have a scenario in mind as you suggest, but alas, making sheaths out of soldiers like Gon is llegal in Seawall! Maybe when they make it out of the city's...
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    Unforgiving Lands - Characters

    Here's Gon, right after joining up with the team. His class combination is a bit suspect, being a soldier of the Honor Guard and all... :uhoh: Gon Yandel, Human Male Fighter 2/Rogue 3 Str 14, Dex 18, Con 10, Int 14, Wis 10, Cha 12 Fort +4, Ref +7, Will +1 AC 18, 31 hp Atk: +1 Longsword +5...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Boo-yah! :D No, it's not another chapter, I'm afraid. It's Gon's stat block! Our beloved roguish soldier is now officially statted in the Rogue's Gallery. Go see him at the link in my signature, if you dare ;)
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Before you read the next chapter, I'd like to make one big announcement: first, thank you all who keep reading and adding to the view count, it's what keeps me going, besides the joy of writing this stuff out :D Secondly, did this story hour get like 50 views in the last update?! I could've...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    So! 20 views per update, ain't that sweet? It'd be even sweeter to have additional reader comments, but hey, I'm not complaining, just sayin' :) Enjoy this chapter folks, or at least I hope you enjoy it as much as I did writing it. Comments and criticism are always welcome :D Chapter 13...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Chapter 12 is here, sooner than we all expected. Heck, I really can't believe I had the energy to write it up today, but the more the merrier, I say :D. Turns out I don't have carpal tunnel syndrome, so I just need to take better care of my wrists, is all. Likewise for my neck, I just need to...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Here we go, one more chapter done :) I can't believe I finished it in 2 hours, editing and all. Don't take that as a sign of "rushness", but rather "swift writing" 8) Enjoy thyselves, readers :D Chapter 11 A dwarf at the pier Reldo the Mighty snorted, a bit irritated by the news brought...
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    Memoirs of a Lawyer turned Dungeoncrawler (Updated May 13, 2008)

    Heya, Altelazar! :) Good sir, I've read the first three chapters of your story, and I must say it captivates me. Simple to read, follow, and understand, told from the point of view of a psionic lawyer... simply perfect, I love the style. You've got a fan in me, so do keep going with the story...
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    Unforgiving Lands - Characters

    Stats after the warehouse battle and when new equipment is obtained :) Say hello to Darius, the newest member of the crew! Gilliam, Human Male Fighter 3 / Ex-Knight 4 Str 16, Dex 17, Con 12, Int 10, Wis 10, Cha 12 Fort +8, Ref +5, Will +2 AC 19 , 56 hp Atk: +11/+6 melee +1 Adamantine Bastard...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    I don't feel like my body is in pain all the time anymore! Jubilation! Let us achieve, and all those things. Like by, say, reading the newest chapter :) Rogue's Gallery is going to be updated shortly; we've got a couple of level ups and equipment-updating to do! CHAPTER 10 The aftermath...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    My body is revolting against me. I'm serious. First my wrists hurt, as always. Then my eyes. Both parts stop hurting as of late, and what happens? My neck hurts! It's a first, I must say. Apparently, too much PC use in uncomfortable positions will bring neck pain, so I need to take pills every...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Continuation here! Seeing that the soldiers were in trouble, Lazarus started to run in their direction, readying a prayer of healing for them. In his hurry, the priest didn't see the gray mist forming ahead, blocking his path. The mist started to take form quickly, and while the primal roar...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    Writing ten pages of battle is painful. Why didn't anyone tell me it could be so painful for my neck, eyes and wrists? 'Kay, enough complaining... It's the first massive battle in the story, so I hope you enojy it! :D CHAPTER 9 Warehouse blitz The place was still, like a mountain when the...
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    Unforgiving lands - Now in hiatus - Details at last post

    CHAPTER 8 Night hunt “How many will accompany me into the building, sir?” Vincent asked politely, not really expecting anything. Any number greater than zero was enough, in his mind. Master Ender revised his notes, all placed neatly on top of his elegant and sturdy desk, before replying...
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