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Mahtave, your words, combined with all the encouragement I've received so far, give me the strength of will to keep this train rolling :D Thank you very much for the reply, I appreciate it immensely.

I edited the title, so that it actually matches the name of my story hour, now that I changed it. That's all :p

It's good to be back to writing! It took me less than I expected, too, so double plus good! :D This chapter is about switching a couple of wrongs into rights, more than anything, thus it's focused on character development. Don't worry, you won't get something like this for a long time again...

That's good advice :)

Thank you for posting your opinion on the story hour, Boss, it gives me a lot of encouragement to pick it up from where I left and move on with the next chapter :D I'll definitely keep going, now that I've changed what wasn't right in the beginning. I'll give myself more time and more...

First of all, thank you both for responding to my comment. It shows that you want me to go on with the story, however that might be, and that you care :) BLACKDIRGE - I'm afraid I'm not good at creating a title to "snatch" people's attention and draw them in, since you've pointed out how cliche...

I'm afraid I need to put this story hour in hiatus for an indefinite amount of time. The amount of physical effort it takes me to develop each chapter is just too much for me if no one replies to the story, even if only to critizice what's wrong with it. I might go back to writing if I feel...

I feel like I've been writing this story hour since the dawn of time. Is that normal? I also feel like my eyes burn and my head wants to explode. Is that a standard happening for novice story hour writters? :uhoh: I now give you Chapter 6, what I consider one of the best so far, of the few...

Kahleen's stat block has been updated in the Rogue's Gallery, isn't that just pure awesomeness? ;) For all of you who are interested in this story hour: please, I beg of you, criticism, blatant praise and all sorts of coments are more than welcome! If you don't say anything, I'll assume that...

Heeere comes a new challenger! I mean character, that's exactly what I was trying to say :p Kahleen, Half-elf Female Druid 5 Str 10, Dex 14, Con 12, Int 10, Wis 18, Cha 13 Fort +5, Ref +3, Will +8 AC 12, hp 29 Atk: +3 melee unarmed 1d3 Feats: Point Blank Shot, Martial Weapon Proficiency...

Chapter 5 Path of the Shaman Neither Gilliam nor Vincent spoke then, stunned as they were by the woman's proclamation. The rugged-looking half-elf appeared to be waiting for either warrior to say something. “Since you are fine now, I will be going my way” she said, getting up from the ground...

To all of you faithful readers out there: I'm sorry, I apologize. From now on, I'll double check every single line of my chapters before I dare post them up here. I noticed that a battle scene had a severe inconsistency at one point, and several words were misspelled throughout the whole story...

Happy new year to all of you! :) Enjoy the longest chapter so far! Chapter 4 Tenacious assailants After leaving the Barbarian's corpses for carrion to take over, the pair of warriors resumed their trip, their steps accelerated slightly by the realization that they were being targeted by...

Chapter 3 Blood on the road Vincent and Gilliam had traveled for three days on the road, the only one made for reaching the city of Seawall, situated at the coast. It was the safest way to travel, but that didn't mean that it was devoid of any dangers, since only the section closest to the...

Aaaaaand we have a Rogue's Gallery for our two handsome characters! :) See them here

This is for my story hour, Unforgiving Lands. 100% Fiction ;) Gilliam, Human Male Fighter 2 / Ex-Knight 4 Str 16, Dex 17, Con 12, Int 10, Wis 10, Cha 12 Fort +8, Ref +4, Will +1 AC 18 , 49 hp Atk: +10/+5 melee MW Bastard sword, +9 ranged Throwing Knife (1d4+3) Full Atk: +8/+8/+3/+3 melee 2 MW...

Chapter 2 Knight and Bodyguard “You don't talk much, do you?” Vincent inquired as he hoisted his traveling pack on his back in order to start another day of walking from where they set camp. Gilliam only nodded in response, proving Vincent's comment right in doing so. He was almost finished...

Title: Unforgiving Lands Author: Cerulean Wings Number of Threads: 1 Type: Fantasy System: D&D 3.5e Setting: The North Started: 28 December 2007 Status: Ongoing Average Installment Length: Medium Average Frequency of Installments: Bi-Weekly Available for Download? No Style: 3rd person...

Chapter 1 The House of Wisdom Berendes Mithrar, Patriarch of the Mithrar clan and Pledged of House Dagoth paced back and forth across the richly adorned carpet that was placed in the center of the no-less richly decorated chamber. It was dark outside, since it was close to midnight, but the...

Salutations, people of EN World! I'm a new author for the Story Hour forum, and I'm here to start making my story known :) This tale is 100% fiction, not based in an actual real-life game, and is staged in the campaign setting called The North, created for anyone to use. I don't know the author...