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We made it to two pages! Really enjoying seeing this come to life here. It just feels...right, in a way.

Gossamer gets a turn in 1st person? What a pleasant surprise.

As I’m reading this, I always think about how these things look like in an actual session. There’s so many creative, unique situations, that it’s hard for me to imagine them from what I’m familiar with. Also might be stuff you’ve added as well when writing. Makes for one heck of an adventure.

Definitely understand where you’re coming from with large parties. In the moment, it really is a challenge to try to get a good amount of dialogue in without completely stealing the show. That’s probably why I’m so drawn to quiet moments, because it allows for the characters (and in some cases...

The quiet character moments are easily my favorite parts of your writing. Really enjoyed this one.

Frogs and I have a history in DND. Be it big or small, they always manage to cause me great trouble.

One of my biggest wonders is what Arnara actually dreamed that one time. Perhaps that will remain a mystery but what do I know?

Now I’m curious about how this would have gone down if Balthasar had died instead.

United at last! And Myrai’s having a terrible time. Nothing unusual here.

Lots of stuff finally coming together, and The Blade unmasked too. All very interesting... On another note, I really enjoy the forensics/trail following from Mobad. Not that long ago, I wrote a short story for a scholarship, and I decided to make it a murder mystery. The thing I learned from...

To be fair, a damp jail cell is probably in my Top 10 most uncomfortable places I would want to sleep.

Talk about an update. Ended up answering a lot of questions I had. Looking forward to the next part

The forensic vibe is really cool. I like to see that kind of creative problem-solving. Although, that’s probably nothing compared to whatever magic trick Myrai pulled.

Geez, framed skin? Talk about a hellish way to find your dead relative. The Blade is still great, definitely needed in the face of fleshy portraits, massive blood basins, and a couple too many vegepygmies for comfort.

Another day, another way to get Myrai captured by endless torturers. Also, that’s...not good. Is she really dead again?

I’m really liking the two different perspectives. Helps give a better grasp of the the world outside the lens of just one party group.

Aaaaand, we’re live! Certainly an interesting batch of characters so far. I think my favorite new character so far is The Blade, for reasons I don’t think I need to explain. This whole ranch setup has been pretty cool so far. I enjoy the setup and the eventual chaos that erupts from the...

Don't mind me bumping the thread. Wow, what an absolutely incredible story, and what a journey it has been reading it through over these past several months (It took several, several hours for me to read it all, but it also did make a great personal bedtime story when I'd read it at night)...