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Ok - kept WIS save new version here

Blue published here. others to follow. Black here White here Red here Gold here Green here

Right, @Cleon what bit of the efreet firelord do you want to tweak next

ok looks good - published here

Re blood - good question. Am tempted to make it any blood as it's amorphous (and makes a contrast to the vampire for instance) description looks good though seeing "undead" used as a noun in this way (not as collective noun) I find a little grating for some reason...I'd use it as an adjective...

yep/description time

yep

I'll take 75hp

If Wave of Lethargy has no recharge, should the life drain's damage be upped a little then (say to 17 (4d6+3))?

Yeah ok, more I think of it I am happy with that

Tossing up between recharge 4-6 and 5-6 - I like the idea of it having an AoE attack that can be used more than once in a combat.

sounds good

Yep - they look good to me so nymph next

ok x 2

yep

"More surprisingly" implies a surprising fact in the previous sentence - otherwise looks all good

yep - all looks good

agreed

yep/agreed

all sounds good to me