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Well crud. Rodrigo, please re-send.

BSF, I do not have your R1S6.

Round 1, Set 5 BardStephenFox Herobizkit - Untitled beginning Herobizkit was unable to complete a story, but did post a beginning. Despite the lack of a finished product, I will try to provide a little feedbakc. You have a good opening. Without the rest of the story it is hard to tell if you...

Looks like BardStephenFox's R5 is on the other machine; I will post judgments for R5 and R6 tonight.

Round One, Set Four BardStephenFox MarauderX - Untitled MarauderX brings us a tale that unravels in an interesting way. The opening is a bit heavy with three pictures introduced almost immediatelyInitially they make almost no sense. But it wraps together at the end. It is a very interesting...

Round One, Set Three judgment BardStephenFox Yangnome - 4/14-4/17 You have an interesting opener to a fun story here. However the opening doesn't seem to fit into place with the timeline as the story advances. You have an established event, then you flash back 72 hours. Then you move...

Don't forget to send her a couple of bags of leaves :) Happy birthday!

Judgment - Round 1, Set 2 BardStephenFox Aris Dragonborn - The Justicar You have a good story here. It has good pacing, good action and interesting characters. I enjoyed reading it. This is not to say that the story doesn't have room for improvement, because it does. But I wanted to start...

Waiting on a few more judges' decisions and then we'll post some more winners.

Round One, Set One Judgment BardStephenFox Funeris vs Macbeth Funeris - Checkmate OK, this is an interesting story. Very fun! It definitely appeals to the EN World Gamerati. Kudos to writing to your audience. But how about I add some actual critiquing in here? I like your opening. You...

Round One Set Six I believe we are down to our last two competitors. Wild Gazebo vs. Bibliophile

Waiting on one more Round One judgment.

There is no editing...once you post, absent some kind of technical heave by the boards, you're entered :)

There is no 'try'....

Except that if you won, we'd have to switch out for the next round as well. Also, there is no way I have time to judge :)

Exactly. It's difficult enough to rig rounds to miss days that are bad, for one thing; trying to post pictures to match all two or three competitiors' personal schedules, when they may not all live in the same time zone as me, let alone each other, would be a nightmare. And, as BardStephenFox...