Thanks Rystil! Excellent work. I would make the following changes (I highlighted the changes in bold):
Armor Class: 28 (+5 Dex, +9 gleaming full plate +1, +2 natural, +2 deflection),
touch 17, flat-footed 23
Attacks: +3 keen lucky Greater Mind Blade +19/+14 melee (2d6+5 damage 17-20/x2)
Saves...