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Well, three years ago I read Sagiro's, Piratecat's and Small Beginnings. Then I went off to uni, lost track of time, and reappeared now. Sagiro's is finished (?) and Piratecat's is twice the size it was - so my task of nestling back into the story hour groove has proved a little difficult...

Hi Puppy Kicker, First of all, great name. Though I'm guessing it might lose you a few readers from the get go. Secondly, I'm working my way through this - and what I've read so far (three of the character intros) is pretty good. Though please please please chop up the paragraphs a little. I...

Hey Broccli_Head, Sorry its taken me so long to read up on your thread! This stuff is great so far, I'm kicking myself that I haven't read it before. The prologues really worked (so many don't) and added a heady dose of political intrigue. I love that stuff. Looking forward to the next post...

Hey Rocco, I'm still here! You know, I was rooting for the gully dwarves to do the whole slave uprising thing. I can't believe they ripped that poor guys head off. Uprising cancelled then! Keep posting and people will keep reading. I will, and rach too. Never never never give up, as...

Yeah, it was a close one, but the Emberguard was pretty wounded (ish - damage reduction 20/+1 helped a little). Torious' de-limbing, and a Sliverspike in the neck did what they should. Anyway, the Emberguard would have their revenge(s). I love them so much! They're like children to me...

Strahd! Uh... sorry, Thalin! Great to see you. Nice to have the team on here now. Yes, we have completed the Magic Circle! Or is that Circle of Madness? Yeah, you guys nuked the guards. Dammnit. By the way, this last part is another whopper. anyway: Part 4 of 4 Torious roared again, his...

Keep the pictures in you fool! Why would you not? Though the cluttering up the thread thing is entirely subjective. I liked the big dock fight. Nice idea with the giant-tuning-stick-whistle malarkey. Is that ripped from somewhere? Once again, nice description. And now I'm getting a much better...

Cheers haiiro, i really appreciate the comments. And yeah, there is a lot to read through - and forgive me for the stagger from present tense to past tense in the middle of it all. Hope you like the beginning up until now. Let me know what you think. I've been planning to go back through the...

And... I've caught up. Phew. Great stuff again Haiiro, really enjoying it so far.. You've got a knack for setting the scene and that works beautifully, that roof fight, for example. Also, well, up until those giants maraudered out of the ship, I was given the impression of a very grounded...

Cheers Broccli_Head, Yeah, Torious' player (yes you Freedom's Edge) got pretty psyched for the whole whipping-barbarians-into-frenzy-to-storm-wall scenario. The speech that Torious gave in front of the Ulutian's doesn't really do justice to his player's real life attempt. Think Maximus...

Apologies to everyone waiting for this. Hey Milo, good to see you floating about. And yes, Milo starts to come into his own (not that the little guy already hasn't - trust me when I say he was a tough nut to crack and that sneak attack is a geewhiz when it works - bloody TrueStrike). ANYWAY...

Hey haiiro, good work so far. Multiple perspectives was a nice touch. Just so you know, I have a real soft spot for beholders - and illithids, as a matter of fact (crossing fingers they get involved at some point) - so this is pretty cool so far. Oh yeah, the celestial bee. Nice work Jaehn...

Oh yes, chapter 10 has become a bit of a whopper. It's spread from 3 parts to 4, so no Emberguard in this installment, whoops. Let me know what you guys think as so far... Spider

Part 2 of 4 Milo thrashed deeper into the hillock of snow as the gates groaned open to the sound of the horn. Isplit’s sharp weasel claws dug into his chest as Milo caught his breath. The horn call pitched higher for a note then stopped. Sorcerer and familiar trembled as the thunder of the...

Broccli_Head! Black Bard! Great to have you guys back on board. My computer is being an absolute nightmare at the moment. I won't go into details, suffice to say I would love to put my fist through the screen. Update incoming... Yours, Spider (who is rubbing his hands together at the next...

ShawnLStroud, thanks for the comments - I'm glad you're back! I wonder if some of the other regulars will claw their way back on? Yes, Milo, Thalin and Torious are here to stay. In fact, the next update should be tomorrow night (today being thursday in the city). Buddy, I would love think...

Nice updates! Did the characters role play the whole dancing/singing sequence? That would have been interesting. Tuggle is easily the most advanced of the characters, and despite a loathing of gnomes, I'm kinda rooting for him. Well haiiro this is pretty good so far. Keep it up! Spider

Ice, Luck and Honour Chapter 10: Another Brick in the Wall Part 1 of 4 Middle/Late Winter, Realms Date 1372 Milo stood next to Mikka, each of the half men holding an antler just as tall as they were. Milo nudged the tiefling and pointed at Torious and Vaerana, then mimed being sick. Thalin...

But Torious, that which does not kill you makes you stronger. And I seem to remember you being a slight badass as the campaign progressed. At times. Once or twice. Maybe once. Perhaps. By the way, for those readers who don't know, freedoms_edge is Torious' player. On a literary note, I'm...

Hey Rocco, First of all, I like your writing style, you have some really good descriptions. Paragraph chunks based on senses are great, the first "sounds" bit was the best section. So this is a personal story, rather than an adventure account? To be honest, I thought the dialogue was a...