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  1. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Rodrigo Istalindir What happened at the break? Up to the end of your first post, I was in awe. The narrator was great, the story was in full swing, and I had just gotten a good glimpse at the darkness hiding beneath the humorous tone. The coke image was great, though the aftermath was *very*...
  2. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Couldn’t have done it with the original deadline even though now I’ve got some time to spare. Oh well, it’s the European Soccer Championship, I’m sure I’ll find some way to pass my time... DIsharrock, good luck. I’m quite happy with my story (though if history has anything to say, that’s rather...
  3. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    ENWorld Short Story Smackdown: Berandor vs. DIsharrock Once again, a mild grandma warning for themes and language. Maybe I’ll do a children's story for the finals? Denial »I’m sorry,« I said. I stood before the bed and looked down at Janey. »For what?« she asked. »Don’t tell me you have...
  4. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Awesome book. Edit: End of first draft, 4,400 words. Going to sleep now. I’m not sure what to cut, but I will find something. Good night.
  5. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    I’m already at 3000 words again, and still 2 pictures to use.
  6. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Only if you have a possible angle for the story but won't give it to me.
  7. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    I think I have an inkling of an idea, but I need an angle. So, anybody got an angle to spare?
  8. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Herreman, I should kill you for the final image. Maybe I will. Maybe I won't. But I should. Argh!
  9. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Is that time okay for you, then? I'd rather beat you with just 4 hours of writing time on my part, you know.
  10. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Thursday 9am means 1am, means deadline Fri-Sa-Sun 1am; Friday 9am means monday 1am. Or am I totally wrong here? I thought we were on a strict tournament schedule, so Rodrigo-Piratecat, DIshallnotrock-me. But I'm fine either way.
  11. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    I just thought: If you want to start no earlier than thursday anyway, could you start my match on friday? That would give me one more or less good day for writing.
  12. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    I have no idea what you're talking about. There is nothing to talk about. And now you better shut your mouth, or I'll...
  13. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    So, all we need to determine now is whether I get to beat Rodrigo or Piratecat in the finals, right? Cool.
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  15. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    In spoilers, so I won't give the judgement away: First off, thanks to the judges for their time and effort, and to Starman for not only a tough round, but a fun one as well, with every new smacktalking post here driving me to better writing :) I thought about that and I would have kicked this...
  16. Berandor

    EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!

    Yeah, quick judgement is good, you getting sleep is better. Thanks for letting us know.
  17. Berandor

    Looking for Combat Mat advice

    the Flipmap is awesome in more or less any regard. I'm completely happy with it.
  18. Berandor

    Now that 4e is upon us, what will you do?

    We're starting a new Eberron 3.5 campaign and I'm also starting a Burning Wheel game.
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