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Seasong: beat you to it! Don't worry Indigo - I tease seasong becasue I'm jealous of his talent as a writer! Here is the link. Seasong has posted two adventures - but I think you'll be impressed with several of the writers there. http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=38786

Found it! Yaaaaay! Seasong's story hour, Yaaaaay! so unlike his recent crappy IronDM submission... (sorry, sorry, sorry - couldn't resist) :(

If I was Prisantha: Dispatcher? DISPATCHER?!?! How about I just call you Sir, and no - I won't be demanding the soul just yet - why not take those 101 years...

Seasong and Quickbeam: I can post the ingredients, 6 PM on Friday, if this would help your timelines. Is that ok? Mythago: While I am happy your Dwarven barbarian and current party are so effective, I have to say IronDM submissions are judged for their general playability, not one particular...

Seasong: I may like detail, but mythago could won this one with the exact same wordcount. Mythago has the knack for brevity. If you continue to doubt, go back and read Vaxalon's submisisons. He has a similar talent. All my contestents: Keep in mind I have to critisize **something.** Many...

HI "forrester" it's me - chiming in with my two cents. The ring is quite valuable, even to a spell csater. See invisibility defeats both invisibility AND etheralness. Invisibility is a bigger problem for PCs then it is for many mosnters, due to blindsight. And at high level, etheralness is a...

Whoops! I'd edit it, but you quoted me, so it's too late. Ok, let say instead, that Nifft, and Quickbeam looked "very strong" by comparison to our most recent contestents. Wise guy

Round 2, set 2 Round 2, set 2 Mythago vs. seasong. Well, folks, I have to say, I’m disappointed. Both submissions, though containing strengths, were ultimately weak. The judging was difficult, but only because both sides were riddled with holes. The bummer is mythago starts SO well. The...

mythago AND seasong: prepare for the afore mentioned ripping. After the VERY stong submissions by Nifft, and Quickbeam last round, these two are a little wan by comparison. expect the write up by 1 PM, EST.

Having given seasong enough rope to hang himself with, Incognito sits back to watch the fireworks, already in progress.

TYPES A RESPONSE TO THE "COUNTER-TROLLS" IN ALL CAPS WITH A CONDECENDING TONE, FILLED WITH TYPOS, AND LOGIC ERRORS. USES FLAWED EXAMPLE TO PAT SELF ON BACK - EXPLAINING THAT EVEN SOMEONE WHO IS UNDER 18 CAN REPSOND TO THE ROOT ISSUE OF THE ORIGINAL THREAD IN AN INTELLIGENT WAY. POKES FUN AT...

When the sun rises in the white kingdom, it goes *BUMP** Pir-Cat: Is the rework nearing completion? I am curious also - I like your "old" avatar, the one your using now - good to see the cat's teeth twinkling again.

Serendipity = fortunate coincidence = happy, huggy, love-fest sumbissions ??? = unfortunate coincidence = hacking, assasination, and Intrigue filled submissions. Which would you choose, as an Iron DM judge? :) Best series ever. Leper-rapist as anti-hero, christ figure, and lots of...

Round 2, Set 2 ingredients Unfortunate coincidence Mirror of surpassing beauty Blackguard(s) Deflect arrows Contemplative kraken Serene battlefield The time here is 10:20AM EST, good luck gentlemen

mythago and seasong: Can you both go tomorow?? Your ingredients are still brewing. On the "decent, not outstanding" comment: Both entires were better than decent, I'll 'fess up! :)

Round 2, set 1 Quickbeam vs Nifft Quickbeam and Nifft have submitted similar adventures – which is to be expected as several of the ingredients (Mistaken flag of truce) point to an adventure where our heroes, the PCs, must set to rights a misunderstanding. First pass: Quickbeam’s web of...

Sorry for the delay, folks. I know who the winner is, but I want to give constructive critism, and show a clear reason for my judgement, and it's difficult in this case. both entries were decent, not outstanding, but decent.

Round 1, set 4 Mythago’s critique: Mythago lays out his adventure in a style that is known to me as “story telling” – and like a story taking place – the action is directed and flows along of it’s own accord; the wheels are in motion, rather than having points of interest, or planned combats...

Nifft: Nah - let it stand, the formating is not particularly abrasive Mythago: editing my analysis of your story, right.this.second!