That sounds pretty awesome.This is more a formatting thing, but I've been in a few Pbp games, and the most successful one I was in had great combats. When a round started, the DM would post a current battle map, and a list of the combatants in initiative order. As they took their turns, he'd fill in their initiative line, indicating what they'd done on their turn. So at a glance, you could see all the actions people had taken and follow it really quickly.
That's fairly fast in PbP.I've seen PbP games where the first combat took six days to carry out. Dear God.