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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 8876269" data-attributes="member: 57383">Oh, and I'd better rename the <a href="https://enworld.org/index.php?posts/8867446" target="_blank">Dragon Warrior (Collected)</a> entry to <a href="https://enworld.org/index.php?posts/8867446" target="_blank">Dragon Warriors</a>.EDIT: Updated the Dragon Warriors, during which I noticed that I'd left the STR save proficiency of the initial draft in despite it saying " Saving Throws proficient in DEX, CON, WIS, CHA."Instead of: STR +7 if red, gold or silver; STR +5 if black, blue, brass, bronze, copper, green or whiteIt should have: DEX +5 if gold; DEX +4 if black or silver; DEX +3 if green or red; DEX +2 if blue, brass, bronze, copper or whiteI'd fixed it before, but I'm editing that post in a temp Word file on my computer and forgot to save the correction, so it just reverted to the erroneous STR save when I overwrote the Enworld post with subsequent copy-pastes from the temp version.Never mind, it's correct now!EDITED EDIT:By the way, most official D&D books and the SRD use the "Oxford comma", aka the <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serial_comma" target="_blank">Serial comma</a>, since they're published in American English and many folk over there consider it mandatory.However, I prefer avoid using Oxford commas unless it's vital for clarity, since on those shores it's more a matter of taste and it just looks wrong to me.Consider the difference in the DEX save line:Without Serial Commas DEX +5 if gold; DEX +4 if black or silver; DEX +3 if green or red; DEX +2 if blue, brass, bronze, copper or white Includes Oxford Commas DEX +5 if gold; DEX +4 if black, or silver; DEX +3 if green, or red; DEX +2 if blue, brass, bronze, copper, or whiteShudder. The second version with serial commas just looks fugly.</blockquote>

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