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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Cleon" data-source="post: 9251049" data-attributes="member: 57383">Just noticed that Motion Camouflage. should have a "must make a Wisdom (Perception) check" rather than "must succeed at a Wisdom (Perception) check" as the next sentence starts "On a failure."That makes it: Motion Camouflage. If the giant odonatid moves at least 20 feet towards a creature and then hits it with an attack on the same turn, that target must succeed at a Wisdom (Perception) check against a Dexterity (Acrobatics) check by the odonatid. On a failure, the target cannot use Dodging Flight, Evasive Flight (or a similar defensive ability) to avoid attacks by the giant odonatid until the start of its next turn. The error was a holdover from my earlier draft when I tried squeezing everything into one sentence, but it got too clunky so I split it into multiple sentences and messed up that phrase.Never mind, it's a simple fix…Updating the <a href="https://www.enworld.org/posts/9249257" target="_blank">Giant Damselfly</a>.Updating the <a href="https://www.enworld.org/posts/9249220" target="_blank">Giant Dragonfly</a>.Updating the <a href="https://www.enworld.org/posts/9249560" target="_blank">Imperial Giant Dragonfly</a>.Updating the <a href="https://www.enworld.org/posts/9249563" target="_blank">Tropical Giant Damselfly</a>.I also keep on vacillating as to whether the parentheses around "or a similar defensive ability" where worthwhile or pointless, but I think it scans a lot better than using commas: Motion Camouflage [With Fewer Parentheses]. If the giant odonatid moves at least 20 feet towards a creature and then hits it with an attack on the same turn, that target must succeed at a Wisdom (Perception) check against a Dexterity (Acrobatics) check by the odonatid. On a failure, the target cannot use Dodging Flight, Evasive Flight, or a similar defensive ability to avoid attacks by the giant odonatid until the start of its next turn. </blockquote>

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