A new summoning spell come one come all

[las]

bump.

 

[las]

heres the updated vershen of the spell.

Summon Force Warrior
Conjuration (Summoning) [Force]
Level: Brd 3, Clr 3, Sor/Wiz 3
Components: V, S F/DF
Casting Time: 1 full round
Range: Close (25 ft. + 5 ft./2 levels)
Effect: One summed force warrior
Duration: 1 round/level (D)
Saving Throw: None
Spell Resistance: No

This spell summons a force warrior, which looks like a smaller version of the caster in armor with a small sword. It appears where you designate and acts immediately, on your turn. It attacks who you mentaly tell it to. It has the fallow stats
1 + Wis mod HP/Level
11 + Cha mod + caster level AC
1 + Int mod + caster level attack bonus (this only gives one attack per round no matter the bonus)
Damage as fallows woth the attack of the force warriors weapon
Level____________Damage Die + Int mod
1st-10th_________1d4 + Int mod force damage
11th-15th________1d6 + Int mod force damage
16th-20th ________1d8 + Int mod force damage
A speed of 20 ft.

A force warrior can’t go out of the range of this spell the spell ends.
Focus: A small glass warrior worth 5 gp.

What do you think about this one.

 

[las]

Iron_Chef as I post the new one I spoted the other part of that first post ill go check it out and if I find anything or the like that I think needs change ect. Ill post it k.

 

[las]

bump.

 

[Stalker0]

When you say hp per level, do you mean per caster level?

I like the concept, but I agree, a simpler method of getting the stats would be nice- still its easier than going to the MM for summoned creatures.

I also like the idea of a deflection bonus to AC for being crystalline- but not a shield spell, then its immune to magic missiles.... just because?

 

[Staffan]

The thing that strikes me is that Conjuration spells should generally bring something from place A to place B (or in the case of summoning spells, more or less copy the thing in place A), wheras this thing seems to actually create the force warrior. Also, Force is generally more of an Evocation thing than a Conjuration thing (which would also be better at creating the warrior). On the other hand, Evocation spells tend to act more directly than create an intermediary, so I don't know if it would be particularly good as Evocation either. I'm just rambling a bit here.

 

[las]

some spells realy just fit into 2 schools of spells. (Almost a new school)

 

[Kinomen Dragoon]

this looks alot like the astral construct in someways so maybe their should be a psionic equivalent or is this the astral construct for mages

 

[Staffan]

this looks alot like the astral construct in someways so maybe their should be a psionic equivalent or is this the astral construct for mages

Well, given that Astral Construct is the psionic equivalent of Summon Monster in the first place...

 

[las]

yes thats true but if I wanted to do that then I would have made this a psy power not a spell right (at that point why would I even make it?)