Endzeitgeist
First Post
This pdf is 12 pages, 1 page front cover, 1 page editorial/ToC and 1 page SRD, leaving 9 pages of content.
The book starts with 1+1/2 pages of a short introduction/discussion of the alchemist class.
The main meat of the book are the 30 new feats for the alchemist. They come with the AF's signature commentaries on the feats, which I usually find useful. The feats are:
Accurate Assessment: Learn one statistical value of a foe during combat
Advanced Alchemy: Add Int bonus to alchemical item DC values
Bottoms Up: Drink potions as a move action
Craft Anywhere: Craft 8 hours/day while adventuring
Craftsman: +2 bonus to all craft skill checks
Create Wondrous Creature: Create new life forms
Extra Extract: Prepare an additional extract
Fast Item Creation: Create magic items in half the time
Fire in the Hole: Splash weapons ignore cover
Frugal Crafting: Item creation costs are reduced
Hardy Brawler: Nonlethal DR equal to Con modifier
Improved Sleight of Hand: No penalty to using Sleight of Hand as a move action
Learn Command: Learn commands words when activating magic items blindly
Lighten Weapon: Effort to wield weapon reduced by one category
Lighten Weapon, Improved: Removes the attack penalty for using Lighten Weapon
Mind over Body: Heal more ability damage/day
Minor Damage Reduction: Gain DR 1/− or increase existing DR by 1
Modify Mutagen: Change the penalty you take from a mutagen
Opportunity Shot: Take attacks of opportunity with ranged weapon
Organized Inventory: Draw non weapon items as a free action
Pack Mule: +4 bonus to Str for purposes of carrying capacity
Practice Makes Perfect: +3 bonus when taking 10 or 20 on a skill check
Primeval Fury: Gain combat prowess for a short time
Reliable Bombs: +2 to DCs of bomb effects and damage
Sidestep Charge: +4 bonus to AC against charge and attack of opportunity if missed
Skirmishing: +2 bonus to AC while moving and making ranged attacks
Suicide Bomber: Set off all your bombs at close range
Sundering Bomb: Use bombs to make sunder attacks
Throw and Charge: Throw a weapon and charge as a full round action
Weapon Juggle: Sheath, pick up, and trade weapons as a free action
I hate Accurate Assessment. I loathe it from the bottom of my heart. A feat that actually brings numerical information into the game and makes a character know a certain stat of an enemy in combat as a standard action is so damn broken in my opinion that I'd NEVER, EVER allow it.
I like how advanced alchemy makes alchemical items more useful at higher levels.
Craft Wondrous Creature: Cool idea that should not have been reduced to one single feat but rather get its own pdf. As it stands, it's too generic for my tastes. Sample alchemical creatures like homunculi would have made this plain awesome and once I have designed some sample critters, I think I'll use it. I want more to expand upon the elegant mechanics.
Frugal Crafting: I don't like this one - it makes crafting cheaper. If there is enough gold, you won't need it. If there is not enough gold, it might imbalance the premise of the campaign.
Learn Command: Learn an item command by activating it with use magic device. Wait, what? No way. This does not conform to my concept of magic item activation being complex and people using the skill wildly trying to guess how to use it by rambling, fiddling, pushing the item etc. It's my personal preference, but I wouldn't allow this feat in my campaign.
Lighten Weapon: After doing the math, I can safely say that this feat is perhaps the first to enable wielding larger weapons without breaking balance. Nice.
Primeval Fury: Cool feat, but tying it to e.g. being under the effects of a mutagen would have helped to tie it more to the alchemist. As it stands, I don't like it being so generic.
Suicide Bomber: While a great idea, I don't like the implementation - this feat is a dragon-slayer and in a world where resurrection is only a couple of GPs away, this feat could quickly devolve away from its "Blaze of Glory"-intention to a "Blow yourself up, Alchemist, afterwards we'll resurrect you"-mentality. In a world without resurrection, this would make for a memorable final stand, though.
Weapon juggle: Just a cool idea.
After that, we get three sample alchemist builds, the carpet bomber, the mighty mutant and the mad scientist.
Conclusion:
Editing is top-notch, I didn't notice any typos or glitches. Layout for this first installment of the series, is still in used parchment and not too printer-friendly or aesthetically pleasing. There is, apart fropm the cover no artwork. I already commented on some of the feats I liked and some of them I didn't like, however, my main gripe with this installment is that is does not focus enough on the alchemist for my tastes - while there are necessarily some feats that can be used by more classes than the alchemist, I felt that some of the feats were too generic. Some of the just didn't have the exclusive alchemist vibe and, quite frankly, I consider some of the feats (see above) broken. Thus, combined with the lack of a printer-friendly version and my impression of a lack of class-focus, my final verdict will be 2 stars. If you don't share my problems, add a star.
The book starts with 1+1/2 pages of a short introduction/discussion of the alchemist class.
The main meat of the book are the 30 new feats for the alchemist. They come with the AF's signature commentaries on the feats, which I usually find useful. The feats are:
Accurate Assessment: Learn one statistical value of a foe during combat
Advanced Alchemy: Add Int bonus to alchemical item DC values
Bottoms Up: Drink potions as a move action
Craft Anywhere: Craft 8 hours/day while adventuring
Craftsman: +2 bonus to all craft skill checks
Create Wondrous Creature: Create new life forms
Extra Extract: Prepare an additional extract
Fast Item Creation: Create magic items in half the time
Fire in the Hole: Splash weapons ignore cover
Frugal Crafting: Item creation costs are reduced
Hardy Brawler: Nonlethal DR equal to Con modifier
Improved Sleight of Hand: No penalty to using Sleight of Hand as a move action
Learn Command: Learn commands words when activating magic items blindly
Lighten Weapon: Effort to wield weapon reduced by one category
Lighten Weapon, Improved: Removes the attack penalty for using Lighten Weapon
Mind over Body: Heal more ability damage/day
Minor Damage Reduction: Gain DR 1/− or increase existing DR by 1
Modify Mutagen: Change the penalty you take from a mutagen
Opportunity Shot: Take attacks of opportunity with ranged weapon
Organized Inventory: Draw non weapon items as a free action
Pack Mule: +4 bonus to Str for purposes of carrying capacity
Practice Makes Perfect: +3 bonus when taking 10 or 20 on a skill check
Primeval Fury: Gain combat prowess for a short time
Reliable Bombs: +2 to DCs of bomb effects and damage
Sidestep Charge: +4 bonus to AC against charge and attack of opportunity if missed
Skirmishing: +2 bonus to AC while moving and making ranged attacks
Suicide Bomber: Set off all your bombs at close range
Sundering Bomb: Use bombs to make sunder attacks
Throw and Charge: Throw a weapon and charge as a full round action
Weapon Juggle: Sheath, pick up, and trade weapons as a free action
I hate Accurate Assessment. I loathe it from the bottom of my heart. A feat that actually brings numerical information into the game and makes a character know a certain stat of an enemy in combat as a standard action is so damn broken in my opinion that I'd NEVER, EVER allow it.
I like how advanced alchemy makes alchemical items more useful at higher levels.
Craft Wondrous Creature: Cool idea that should not have been reduced to one single feat but rather get its own pdf. As it stands, it's too generic for my tastes. Sample alchemical creatures like homunculi would have made this plain awesome and once I have designed some sample critters, I think I'll use it. I want more to expand upon the elegant mechanics.
Frugal Crafting: I don't like this one - it makes crafting cheaper. If there is enough gold, you won't need it. If there is not enough gold, it might imbalance the premise of the campaign.
Learn Command: Learn an item command by activating it with use magic device. Wait, what? No way. This does not conform to my concept of magic item activation being complex and people using the skill wildly trying to guess how to use it by rambling, fiddling, pushing the item etc. It's my personal preference, but I wouldn't allow this feat in my campaign.
Lighten Weapon: After doing the math, I can safely say that this feat is perhaps the first to enable wielding larger weapons without breaking balance. Nice.
Primeval Fury: Cool feat, but tying it to e.g. being under the effects of a mutagen would have helped to tie it more to the alchemist. As it stands, I don't like it being so generic.
Suicide Bomber: While a great idea, I don't like the implementation - this feat is a dragon-slayer and in a world where resurrection is only a couple of GPs away, this feat could quickly devolve away from its "Blaze of Glory"-intention to a "Blow yourself up, Alchemist, afterwards we'll resurrect you"-mentality. In a world without resurrection, this would make for a memorable final stand, though.
Weapon juggle: Just a cool idea.
After that, we get three sample alchemist builds, the carpet bomber, the mighty mutant and the mad scientist.
Conclusion:
Editing is top-notch, I didn't notice any typos or glitches. Layout for this first installment of the series, is still in used parchment and not too printer-friendly or aesthetically pleasing. There is, apart fropm the cover no artwork. I already commented on some of the feats I liked and some of them I didn't like, however, my main gripe with this installment is that is does not focus enough on the alchemist for my tastes - while there are necessarily some feats that can be used by more classes than the alchemist, I felt that some of the feats were too generic. Some of the just didn't have the exclusive alchemist vibe and, quite frankly, I consider some of the feats (see above) broken. Thus, combined with the lack of a printer-friendly version and my impression of a lack of class-focus, my final verdict will be 2 stars. If you don't share my problems, add a star.
