DungeonmasterCal said:Looks good. With his name being what it is, I assume he's not a native of the region. Perhaps a missionary of some sort? Ransoori is not common at all, as they've only recently reopened contact with the outside world.
I meant 'common' in the sense of do they speak 'common' or their own language - if it is their own language, then I'll take it. Working as a missionary to try and bring reason to the Ransoori and get them to give up their 'evil' ways works for me.