Any comments on my dungeon mag adventure?

[Larry Fitz]

Jesse is right on target there, to quote an old TV commercial:

"From a deli owner, that's a rave."

 

[Ravellion]

The background doesn't suit my current campaign much, but I will most likely run it later in another campaign as I liked the idea.

Rav

 

[Emirikol]

I'll review it shortly on the Reviews post.

It looks interesting.

Em