[Art] new females

[Liquide]

OK updated my female art page with another addition, please comment and tell me what you think.

This time I give you a Female tiefling wearing a living demon armor, oh and this is my 5th try ever on the female body so keep that in mind and give me helpful comment to improve my skills.

And the link is:
http://www.enworld.org/messageboards/showthread.php?s=&postid=188475#post188475

 

[Liquide]

37 views and yet only one comment (in the other thread) shame on you, I really do need the input so please take an extra minute and post a reply on what you think of it as well.

What needs improving and what I should keep etc . . .

 

[tleilaxu]

not my style, sorry

 

[Ryan Koppenhaver]

It's certainly a lot better than I can do...

[Edit: Nine words, and I still manage to slip a typo in. Sheesh.]

 

[GrimJesta]

Its alot better than I can do. I cant draw the female body to save my life. Then again, Im an amateur cartoonist so bodys dont HAVE to look anatomically correct when I do it.

But heres what I found need improvement:

-The left breast is too much higher than the right. Its her right arm thats up, so that one should be a little higher up.

-Her eyes: I cant tell if its the helm or what, but they look close together to me.

Uh...thats it. And like I said, it might be the helm that does it to the eyes. In the first Batman movie, Michael Keatons eyes looked too close together in the mask too. I guess maybe masks can do that to a persons face...lol.

Other than that, the picture is excellent. Its actually better than alot of things Ive seen in some of the more prominent d20 publishers, lol.

-=grim=-

 

[Liquide]

Its alot better than I can do. I cant draw the female body to save my life. Then again, Im an amateur cartoonist so bodys dont HAVE to look anatomically correct when I do it.

But heres what I found need improvement:

-The left breast is too much higher than the right. Its her right arm thats up, so that one should be a little higher up.

-Her eyes: I cant tell if its the helm or what, but they look close together to me.

Uh...thats it. And like I said, it might be the helm that does it to the eyes. In the first Batman movie, Michael Keatons eyes looked too close together in the mask too. I guess maybe masks can do that to a persons face...lol.

Other than that, the picture is excellent. Its actually better than alot of things Ive seen in some of the more prominent d20 publishers, lol.

-=grim=-

thanks mate , actually my 5th try ever on a female and the eyes are a bit screwed up on the last image due to the resize of the orignial file.

Thanks, and get those comments coming (either here or in the other thread)

 

[GrimJesta]

Lmao, I reviewed the wrong picture.

The demon armor woman has the same problems almost, but its fantastic otherwise:

-You are a bigot against left-breasts. This picture has it significantly smaller.

-The left eye is a bit off.

But this one is great, though. I liked it alot.

::thumbs up::

-=grim=-

 

[Trevalon Moonleirion]

see the other thread for my reply...

In general--they improve as you go down the page, so very good.

 

[Liquide]

Added new females now, I can now offer you the Catwoman (as I wanted her to look ) and the erinyes, my very first female devil.

Oh and they all ahve clothes on so dun worry , just have a look and tell me what you think lads.

 

[Horacio]

I like your drawings a lot. My only complain would be the eyes, a bit too strong, a bit too marked. I don't know exactly how can I explain it, but the eyes seems too dark, too marked...