[Art] new females

Horacio said:
I like your drawings a lot. My only complain would be the eyes, a bit too strong, a bit too marked. I don't know exactly how can I explain it, but the eyes seems too dark, too marked...

Hmmm well, when you figure it out make sure to tell me what it is mate :), oh and thanks for taking the time to look at them.
 

log in or register to remove this ad

Let's take this drawing .

The drawing is beautiful, the woman body is great.
But the eyes, they are too pronounced. They are too defined. They attract the viewer's gaze a bit too much.

Do you see what I mean?
 

Horacio said:
Let's take this drawing .

The drawing is beautiful, the woman body is great.
But the eyes, they are too pronounced. They are too defined. They attract the viewer's gaze a bit too much.

Do you see what I mean?

Hmmm yeah I think I know what you mean, will have some more stuff up later today as well for your input and comments mate ;)
 


This one is wonderful! The eyes problem has dissappeared, and her body and face are great. Really great face.

But... If you want some critics, I can find a minor point.
The sword. It doesn't seem real. It doesn't seem rigid. I mean, the curvature of the sword is very unusual, it seems almost flexible, like a whip... Maybe it's only me...

But the drawing is great, the best of the series.
 

thanks for the critiscm Horacio, and yes the sword isn't done just just sketched in place so that is why it looks odd.

Oh and have a BIG update as well.

Just added 3 new female figures to the gallery.

The new additions are:

The Giant Slayer, an young but yet experienced women that can handle any giant she encounter.

The Elven Vampire, beutiful but yet so dangerous for any living soul that might cross her path.

The elven rogue, dangerous and beutiful.

PLease let those comments come, or just look at the atr, comments and ciritisicm is appriciated though.

// edit //

even though it is the same url as before it might be good if add it another time so you doesn't have to scroll so much ;) .

http://www.enworld.org/messageboards/showthread.php?s=&postid=188475

thanks for your support mates

// end edit //
 
Last edited:

Oh just a quick update, if you wanna discuss my art in real time with me I am almost always in the chat room http://www.d20reviews.com/chat.htm would be nice to have a conversation with you about my style mates.

You can also connect to this chat via Irc useing the below information;
server: chat.psionics.net
channel: #dnd3e.

(I'm in the chat room right now)
 

yet another update

Well I just finished another piece in the female series.
This one is called the vampires embrace and is the first piece that invloves two persons and even a male figure this time.

Not an image that I'm perfectly satisfied with but I wanted to get it posted anyhow since I need constructive critisiscm on how I handled that pose.

Warning the download time for the thread is starting to be a bit long due to all the images there, so if you have a slow connection prepare for some download time.

As usual it can all be found at http://www.enworld.org/messageboards/showthread.php?s=&postid=188475 , so please keep those comments coming in mates.

Oh and Frostmarrow would love to have you look and comment on my stuff as well.

Currently in the chat room again for some more time, so if you wanna discuss my art in real time just follow the link in the above post ;)
 

Remove ads

Top