Brak's sketches etc...

brak1 said:
Hey all,
Drawmack - Just got started on yours last night. I'm probably taking some pretty big liberties, but the discriptions are kinda generic, so I hope that's okay. It'll probably be the end of the week (if I'm lucky) before they're all done. The start of a couple are below (after all the text).

Well the half-elf is great, though the ears should be a bit less pronounced and she carries a shortbow.

The half-dwarf, I thought would look more human.

These are really cool though.
 

log in or register to remove this ad

The half-dwarf, I thought would look more human.

HALF-dwarf. Heh heh... ah... It says half-dwarf. I should read the whole description sometime. Sorry about that. Should be no problem to fix as it's still in pencil.
 

Well, didn't have time to do anything last night. Edits to the freelance webwork is chappin' my butt.

Quickly sketched the two rogues for Drawmack. I'm going to lay out all those characters and then finish them all it once in an effort to be consistant.

Drawmack - One question: can you give me a little more description on the ferale homebrew race?

Here's the quicky on the rogues. Seem to be sharing some "professional tips"

2rogues.jpg
 

Brak,

Do you want to focus on characters or anything ?

I'm always looking for artwork to enhance my story hour (it's in French, so no point in checking it out if you don't speak the language, unfortunately...)

Things I can think of :

- The Baron of Llambeth is a pretty major NPC. Tall and fairly regal but dressed in simple good quality clothes. I figure him with light hair and possibly a short beard. He looks stern.

- The Libraries of the Temples of Mezrâ are huge libraries with study alcoves on the sides. Each of them has a huge egg in its center in which are said to be imprisoned the essence of dragons. They look kind'a like veined marble eggs, only about 3 feet tall...

- The Baron of Razem is a cool future villain. He's a short man who looks sickly, a powerful wizard, and happens to be a vampire...

- His "sidekick" is Pedrus, the captain of the Razem townguard. He is sustained in his evil powers by drinking the blood of the Baron. He's a tall, pale man with long black hair and feverish eyes.

BTW, I really love your drawing style. I think you would find much to enjoy in French comics (maybe you already do ?). I like the fact that it's not "heroic" per se.

Great Stuff !
 

And just like that I've given up on doing all of Drawmack's characters at once. Hopefully I'll have more time to work on those (and the others) this weekend.

Here's the half-elf:

halfelf2.jpg
 

Sammael99 - I look forward to being able to do some of these! Cool ideas. Wish I could read french so I could read your story hour! Hmmm... The Libraries of the Temples of Mezrâ might be interesting to try in Bryce...

As for French comics, I've had very limited exposure, unfortunately. I've read stuff by Moebius, of course, and the odd thing in Metal Hurlant way back when. I'd love to try and get something new, as comics seem to be treated fundamentally different in Europe as a whole. Any suggestions?
 


brak1 said:
As for French comics, I've had very limited exposure, unfortunately. I've read stuff by Moebius, of course, and the odd thing in Metal Hurlant way back when. I'd love to try and get something new, as comics seem to be treated fundamentally different in Europe as a whole. Any suggestions?

The problem with French comics is they're in French, of course... If you're open to non fantasy stuff, I strongly recommend Lewis Trondheim (http://www.fantagraphics.com/artist/trondheim/trondheim.html)

I would also recommend the most humorous French fantasy series called "Dungeon" (guess where that comes from ;)) : http://www.nbmpub.com/humor/trondheim/dungeon/dungeonhome.html

As for the more graphically serious stuff, I have no idea what's available in the US. I'll do some checking up and let you know !
 

Scheduled for 66 hours this week. Hah! Man, all I have time to do is complain about how little time I have. What a whiner.

Anyhoo, here's Conaill. Lighting is all over the place and he looks a little like he's trying to trip the warg. Ah well. Hope you like it!

conaill.jpg
 

Wheeee!!! :):):):D
<Does a little happy dance>

Thanks, Brak, he looks GREAT! As usual, I love your faces. Excellent pose too. I was wondering how you were going to arrange them without either drawing Conaill from the back, or having the warg block the view.

Two details, if you don't mind:

1) Would it be possible to make it a little clearer that he is wearing a breastplate? Some extra shading at his neck and/or a ridge at his right shoulder perhaps?

2) Any way to make it clear that the trajectory of the greatsword goes through the warg? The wound itself looks like it's probably hidden by the warg's neck. Maybe a longer streak of blood trailing the sword, in an arc from the goblin through the warg's neck? Or maybe just changing the angle of the existing streak might do the trick. Would some of those "woosh" lines to indicate movement look too cartoonish?
 

Remove ads

Top