Can I get a critique of my game?

[Shades of Eternity]

Dark Revelations - The Role Playing Game - Book of Progress - Available Now

On Google Books Now.

 

[Shades of Eternity]

http://www.drevrpg.com/2016/01/drevrpg-poll-what-should-focus-for-2016.html

created a poll to see where to head with my work for 2016.

feel free to let me know.

 

[Morlock]

I like the name, love the concept, and like seeing non-standard stuff using D&D rules (I don't know why, I just do).

 

[Shades of Eternity]

Dark Revelations - Twitch Game - Part 1 - Mrs. Bigglesworth Nefarious Machines

http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/v/39205238

Our heroes repair the divination machine, but things quickly go awry.

Enjoy.

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Dark Revelations - Twitch game - Part 2 - Shuffled by a Shuffalo
http://www.twitch.tv/rpglory/v/42105745

Our heroes learn the hard way the lesson of being between a baby shuffalo and it's momma.

 

[marcoasalazarm]

Holy crap, that's a lot of material.

One thing needs to be mentioned: dunno if it's just me, but the "Book Of Arrogance" is appearing with a bad format -a very bad format, it looks like someone tossed it into a paper shredder.

Aside from this, it all looks pretty good. Art is simple, but is good, and the text is even better. Lots of rules, but that's good-more monsters, more gear, more possibilities. I particularly like D20 RPGs, and this is a pretty nice setting.

So kudos, man.

 

[Shades of Eternity]

http://www.drevrpg.com/2016/03/mrs-biggleworths-nefarious-machines.html

posting a link to the module of the twitch game.