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Message: <blockquote data-quote="jkason" data-source="post: 6259792" data-attributes="member: 2710">Reviewing <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Breninyr_Hydref_(Mowgli)" target="_blank">Bren</a>:Quick note to start: I just want to pre-apologize if it seems like I'm being a jerk about spelling and names. It's not my intent. My rules-fu is not strong, so I rely on using the custom search at d20pfsrd a lot when I'm reviewing, especially higher level stuff. I'm not trying to be a d**k; it's just because I often can't find things to check if the names are off because of how I use the site. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile    :)"  data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Basic Info:1) Cleric level is 9 - fixedCombat Statistics:2) I can't figure out where the "Def (01)" bonus is coming from on your CMD. I thought it was a Ring of Protection deflection bonus, but Bren doesn't have one. Weapon Stats:3) Grayflame was spelled wrong. -fixed.Class Features: 4) On the notation for Monk level, the feat is Monastic Legacy, not Heritage. -fixed  5) Calming touch heals 1d6+9 at Bren's current level - fixed.6) Inspiring Command can affect one more ally at this level (total 4) - fixed. 7) You're listing the 8th level domain power for Community, but Bren has Home listed as a Domain, instead. I'm not sure which of those is in error (I can't tell from Bren's prepped spells, because Leadership adds the same spells--Bless and Prayer--he'd lose for taking Home). 8) You've allocated the right number of ranks, but the totals at the top of the Skill section hadn't been updated for Cleric level 9. - fixed. I'm not doing money checks because you're mid-adventure, but did do this in Equipment: 9) I added a note on the sheet like you did for the Monk's Shirt / Robe to explain that the base item for the Brassard of channeling is Phylactery to help track it down for bonuses in future. *********************************2 and 7 are big enough to me that I'm going with NOT YET, though I think they should be quick to resolve.</blockquote>

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