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<blockquote data-quote="Satin Knights" data-source="post: 5736204" data-attributes="member: 6666968">Reviewing Davian:First off, hello and welcome to the forum.A) I did a lot of cleanup and reformatting to remove the left to right scroll bars and substituting the actual values for Misc placeholders.B) Since the character is small, he has only 3/4 the carrying capacity.&nbsp; But, since you are small, all your possessions you have weigh 1/2 as much.&nbsp; It balances out that you are at the max of a light load. Your coin purse should slow you down, but we don't count the weight of the money you are carrying. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)"&nbsp; data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />C) I removed the spells section as a rogue doesn't need it.&nbsp; If you add a class that does need it, it is easy to add back in. D) Davian has Int 13, giving him one bonus language and linguistics which gives him a second.&nbsp; So, you still have two languages to choose.E) The character gets two traits from the APG Chapter 8:Traits or <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/New_Traits" target="_blank">LPF traits</a>.&nbsp; They have to be chosen from two different groups. Ie. Combat, Social, Magic, Faith, etc.F) The INT bonus is +1. Fixed.G) Fixed several skills and marked the untrained class skills with *.H) Finances were off by nine silver.&nbsp; Fixed.Background: good.I am really surprised you are going with rolling HP at every level.&nbsp; If you take the Max-2, you are guaranteed 75%, while rolling will average at 50%.&nbsp; To my knowledge, only one other character has rolled for HP our of the 100+ we have. I could fix many things, but you still need to choose two languages and two traits.&nbsp; Therefore, I cannot give you your approval yet.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Satin Knights, post: 5736204, member: 6666968"] Reviewing Davian: First off, hello and welcome to the forum. A) I did a lot of cleanup and reformatting to remove the left to right scroll bars and substituting the actual values for Misc placeholders. B) Since the character is small, he has only 3/4 the carrying capacity. But, since you are small, all your possessions you have weigh 1/2 as much. It balances out that you are at the max of a light load. Your coin purse should slow you down, but we don't count the weight of the money you are carrying. ;) C) I removed the spells section as a rogue doesn't need it. If you add a class that does need it, it is easy to add back in. D) Davian has Int 13, giving him one bonus language and linguistics which gives him a second. So, you still have two languages to choose. E) The character gets two traits from the APG Chapter 8:Traits or [URL="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/New_Traits"]LPF traits[/URL]. They have to be chosen from two different groups. Ie. Combat, Social, Magic, Faith, etc. F) The INT bonus is +1. Fixed. G) Fixed several skills and marked the untrained class skills with *. H) Finances were off by nine silver. Fixed. Background: good. I am really surprised you are going with rolling HP at every level. If you take the Max-2, you are guaranteed 75%, while rolling will average at 50%. To my knowledge, only one other character has rolled for HP our of the 100+ we have. I could fix many things, but you still need to choose two languages and two traits. Therefore, I [COLOR=Yellow]cannot [/COLOR]give you your approval [COLOR=Yellow]yet[/COLOR]. [/QUOTE]

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