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<blockquote data-quote="Satin Knights" data-source="post: 5935051" data-attributes="member: 6666968">Looking over Orion Drake:a) I changed Ability to STR or DEX in the weapons section.b) I split up melee and thrown weapon.c) A javelin specifically takes a penalty if used in melee.&nbsp; So, you may want to drop that option.d) You haven't purchased any daggers. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f61b.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":p" title="Stick out tongue&nbsp; &nbsp; :p"&nbsp; data-smilie="7"data-shortname=":p" />e) I marked which skills are class skills without ranks with an *.&nbsp; That makes it easier to focus on them later and you don't have to go reread the book each level to check if they are a class skill.f) I personally hate leading zeros, but only stripped them in the inventory section.&nbsp; It makes it far easier to tally the column when reformatted that way.g) The finances were off by about 10 gp.&nbsp; Adjusted.i) Did I mention you didn't buy any daggers?j) Lamp oil but no lamp??k) I added the hidden info block to the basic info section that allows tracking of your character on the <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Adventures" target="_blank">Adventures</a> page.&nbsp; Since your picture is landscape oriented, you can upload a second into wiki in portrait orientation and adjust the hidden fields to use the portrait version.Other than the daggers and lamp, everything is fine.&nbsp; So, I hereby give the second APPROVAL of Orion Drake for play.&nbsp; You are officially ready to go the the Dunn Wright Inn and wait for a GM to come in and recruit with an NPC.&nbsp; Welcome Aboard.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Satin Knights, post: 5935051, member: 6666968"] Looking over Orion Drake: a) I changed Ability to STR or DEX in the weapons section. b) I split up melee and thrown weapon. c) A javelin specifically takes a penalty if used in melee. So, you may want to drop that option. d) You haven't purchased any daggers. :p e) I marked which skills are class skills without ranks with an *. That makes it easier to focus on them later and you don't have to go reread the book each level to check if they are a class skill. f) I personally hate leading zeros, but only stripped them in the inventory section. It makes it far easier to tally the column when reformatted that way. g) The finances were off by about 10 gp. Adjusted. i) Did I mention you didn't buy any daggers? j) Lamp oil but no lamp?? k) I added the hidden info block to the basic info section that allows tracking of your character on the [URL="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Adventures"]Adventures[/URL] page. Since your picture is landscape oriented, you can upload a second into wiki in portrait orientation and adjust the hidden fields to use the portrait version. Other than the daggers and lamp, everything is fine. So, I hereby give the second [COLOR=Lime][B]APPROVAL[/B][/COLOR] of Orion Drake for play. You are officially ready to go the the Dunn Wright Inn and wait for a GM to come in and recruit with an NPC. Welcome Aboard. [/QUOTE]

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