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Message: <blockquote data-quote="jkason" data-source="post: 5945655" data-attributes="member: 2710">Reviewing <a href="http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Zhen_Yu_(Korsakovia)" target="_blank">Zhen Yu</a>:1) Just as a comment: I have a bit of trouble reconciling the wasting curse with the character pic. Doesn't impact approval, but she looks really good for a girl slowly rotting away. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink    ;)"  data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />2) The "Background" slug in Basic Information is meant to indicate whether the player is allowing GM's to use it for games they might develop. i.e. "open"  "closed" or "ask."3) Crit for Heavy mace is 20/x2 - fixed4) People with better rules-fu than I may correct me, but the Healing Hands revalation doesn't seem like it's likely to get much use after the first level or so, especially since she has Stabilize in her orisons known; I'm not sure it's worth burning a feat for, though obviously you're welcome to do so.5) The 1st level 'cure' spell was missing from spells known. - fixed 6) Light crossbow only weighs 4 lbs. - fixed and updated total weight7) I changed the sp entries to gp with decimals for ease of totaling. 8) From the totals, I assumed 10 days of trail rations, and added the number. 9) Since LPF has 100% buyback, you might want to go ahead and spend some more. At 1st level, prior to play, you don't have to worry about the Mystic Pearl availability rules, so you can grab a couple 1st level scrolls, for example. If you don't wind up using them, you can sell them back later.10) I'm a bit confused by the circumstances of her mother's death. "her life claimed by the same divine magic a cleric of Amenthia wielded to save the life of the unborn child" suggests a cleric Good goddess used some form of necromancy to steal life from the mother to save the daughter. Maybe you're intending to add a sinister tone to the character's birth (was she really saved by a good priest, or is her wasting an indicator that something not-so-good tried to use her, for example), but if you aren't, you might want to consider either rephrasing or changing a bit to give you the intended tone.Nothing broken with the build as-is, so I APPROVE Zhen Yu for first level. She's now fully approved.</blockquote>

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